Kingdoms: Embers In Ashes[WIP] [OLD VERSION]

[Nightgazer]

@AmericanShakespeare

she’d instead hunt the person

That’s perfect! I can now make Clithus kill Melissa, but that still leave how to make her kill herself…I know! How about we make her suffer auditory hallucination of Sophia hating her for failing to save her, and that deep down Sophia always hated her for whatever reason that would make sense and drive her deeper into despair? Would that work?

What’s this vine doing on my head?

@AmericanShakespeare

Mel trying to kill Sophia

I, for one, am very disappointed happy were that to happen. It’s not like I’m angry that my harem candidates are trying to kill each other or anything.

[MockTurtle]

So, there’s been a while since the last time I checked your wip but I can already tell that you’ve been improving your writing. Your wip is like an statue whose details are getting more polished every time, it seems to be going in a good direction.

[Sophia]

@Nightgazer

On to a more serious note, regarding the ‘everyone can die’ thing, is it possible for a character to die because of another character or as a repercussion of our action? Or do we have to kill them ourselves?

Both.

@MockTurtle

So, there’s been a while since the last time I checked your wip but I can already tell that you’ve been improving your writing. Your wip is like an statue whose details are getting more polished every time, it seems to be going in a good direction.

Heeey mockyy! How are you?

[MockTurtle]

Too busy lately. Don’t worry I’ll keep checking your work once in a while.

[Sophia]

Thanks thanks… Glad to see you in this thread despite the chaos before.

[Earl_of_Arland]

Random question: Can we have a romantic relationship with Marxus…

[Nightgazer]

Depending on whose playthrough, if memory serves right, you can’t do it in the prince playthrough, but you can do it in the princess playthrough.

[Vattena]

You can’t as the prince, but like @Nightgazer said you can as the Princess, BUT you either have to kill Melissa and comfort him, or gave him love potion.

[Sophia]

@Earl_of_Arland

Random question:

@Vattena

You can’t as the prince, but like @Nightgazer said you can as the Princess, BUT you either have to kill Melissa and comfort him, or gave him love potion.

Sabby answered it.

[Earl_of_Arland]

@Vattena

You can’t as the prince

aww, why??

but anyway, thank you

[Okami-Nora]

@Earl_of_Arland

@Vattena

You can’t as the prince

aww, why??

but anyway, thank you

Marxus is our half-brother when you play the Second Prince MC. And due to the fact both he and Marxus share the same father, there’s a blood relation between them.

[Earl_of_Arland]

Understandable have a great day

[Sophia]

@Earl_of_Arland

aww, why??

Nu uh. I’m not writing a brotherly incest here.

Also, it wouldn’t suit Marxus’ preference data.

[Drakeye]

Our of curiosity what is our Darling brothers personal preference is it at all like Melissa or any of the other ROs

[stsword]

Considering how he pervs on Melissa when they met, I’d be surprised if Melissa isn’t his type.

[Vattena]

@Drakeye

Our of curiosity what is our Darling brothers personal preference is it at all like Melissa or any of the other ROs

@stsword

I’d be surprised if Melissa isn’t his type.

This are Marxus preference

@Sophia

Marxus has a mother complex, and is usually attracted to older women. Melissa has this mature body, and is quite developed for her age. When Marxus met her, she was 15, but stands tall for her age, like Sansa Stark. Marxus was already attracted to her that time, but holds no feelings.

I think i recall _Pia @Sophia said that he eventually love Melissa when they married.

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@stsword

Considering how he pervs on Melissa when they met

Wait when he like that? at part when mc age is 15 years old?

[stsword]

The MC was still 14 at that point, almost 15.

Since Melissa seems younger than the MC from their introduction, when big bro is talking about Melissa being gorgeous, it’s a 20 year old man talking appreciatively on the sexual charms of a 14 year old girl.

Now perhaps in the game setting that’s considered appropriate, but to me, gross gross gross gross.

Edit: Okay, apparently Melissa is older than the MC, although I have to say she seems younger to me throughout the game so far.

Less creepy, but still gross in my opinion.

[Vattena]

@stsword

The MC was still 14 at that point, almost 15.

Since Melissa seems younger than the MC from their introduction, when big bro is talking about Melissa being gorgeous, it’s a 20 year old man talking appreciatively on the sexual charms of a 14 year old girl.

Now perhaps in the game setting that’s considered appropriate, but to me, gross gross gross gross.

ah that, well it is understandable.

[L0G1C]

It seemed to me that he was just teasing his brother then. I didn’t get a sense of perviness, I just thought he was trying to embarrass us in front of our lady friend. I can see where you’re coming from though.

[Nightgazer]

You know, there’s something I’ve been meaning to ask…what about Marxus side of the story? He’s a healthy 20 year old man at the point where he was forcefully wed to Melissa, surely he has someone he wants to marry with before, right?