Kingdoms: Embers In Ashes[WIP] [OLD VERSION]

I not kill Marxus unless if he became really intolerable. As for Andus I thinking of letting him life the consequences of his poor decisions as king, since it’s seems like death is easy way out for him with mess(like the rebel for example) he left. And as for Vince as much as I want to also let him life his actions consequence he still quite young, so I probably going to kill him.

i doubt if you let andus live there will be a rebelión… i think that only happen if andus die and marxus take the throne.
(and if you mean a certain general rebelling… if andus live i think that general will die for sure)

I think I recall that @Sophia said there some point where king andus going to… Kinda weakened(?) I won’t surprised if rebellion start at that point. Besides I think the rebellion do start when Andus still a king.

yeah but one rebellion is cause of andus for trying to steal the land of a powerfull noble, while the other rebelión is cause of a bastard taking the throne :smirk:

with andus alive even if there is a rebellion i dont think it will last long, hes a bloody cruel King.

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True that :thinking: but I also don’t think it’s going to be fast either with that Duke as the one who start or/and lead it. @Sophia how long the rebellion going to last?

if i were the mc i will kill andus and marxus when that rebellion (the one lead by that general) start and take the throne,
but if you dont want to kill andus and marxus i dont see it lasting too much either.:smirk:
( what will be a good question is that even if that rebellion is stopped it will turn many families against the King and marxus after killing that noble and his soldiers… so in the end is a win win for our mc :smirk: )

is Duke Jerome do a general though, considering he Victoria brother and King Andus may not trust him because of that?(then again he do probably have strong military force so that makes sense if he do)

Probably, though there can also more that support them instead because of that though, since that way many going to scared to do the same thing again and it’s mean there will be less “mess” in Darvis. Besides I think it’s quite known that King Andus are ruthless king.

@Sophia (double post…)

what I found
  • what can I do for you, your highness?" Sophia said, with a hint of sarcasm.

your Highness or Your Highness? (I unsure about this one so I can be wrong)


  • Marxus stared at you, and quielty smiled. There is something about his smile that sent you shiver.

quietly


  • “Why don’t you take Melissa in the Royal Garden?”

to the Royal Garden


  • "Excuse me, ${name}." Clithus said. "I have to escort the princess back to her room."

This may just me, I found it weird that Clithus just call him his name and not Prince ${name} with how formal she is.


Also,

Why there no Clithus and Kris/Kridus here?


And I have questions,

“Yes, I’m the fourth daughter of Duke Vishal of Delhan.” She said.

Who is Clithus siblings? Are mc can meet them? Or is they perhaps death?
Edit:

I also found weird thing

Karlos left the room so if I choose “Can we at least civil to one another?”

It’s should be like this:

But instead it’s like this:

Strangely enough, there no content if I not choose some choice (such as “About Me” in wedding night) because I skimming. And if I do choose choice that I skip, it’s show up. :confused:

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Approximately a year.

Yeah, you’ll meet them. :slight_smile: Cuz they are one night stands…

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Damn… CSIDE and ChoiceScript are so different…

Is they all male or all female or male and female? Are you already decided what their names?

All female, and I haven’t decided on the names yet.

why of all Duke Vishal daughters it’s clithus and only her who is knight? (it’s probably going to be spoilery though). Also regarding her sisters names, their probably personality can help to search for it.

Yeah, that’s a huge spoiler. :slight_smile: Clithus’ history is interesting because of that and I can’t spoil it.

Nah, I’ll probably generate some names online. Thanks anyways.

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I’ll be working on another project to expand my experience as a coder and an author. Rest assured, I’ll still be updating Kingdoms frequently. :slight_smile:

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its the handsome wolf one???

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I think she work on “This Blood of Mine”

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True fans do no believe this and are probably channeling their inner Lemongrab right now. :wink:

(Don’t know what I mean? Youtube Lemongrab and “unacceptable” right now…)

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um...... this?

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Yes, that. I love Justin Roiland but I can only withstand the Lemongrab voice for so long.

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