Kingdoms and Empires (WIP) SFW Prologue of the Great Rewrite (213,184 words)

No worries take care of yourself first and foremost :smile:

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Hi @FatedFlame

I played the demo, i want to say it’s amazing.
At first i thought this would be like a standard Isekai story, but i’m glad i was wrong.

It has Game of Throne vibe a bit, that shows different multiple POV and each character is interesting.
The world itself is whoa, it’s very big.
My most enjoyable part that i find unique is that i can feel the intensity of the crisis and MC suffering maybe because the MC is also coming from our modern society.

The first sudden V’era & Demon encounter is really chaotic, Ramiel great entrance and save the day.
Uriel solo against a V’era, bruh, we are still traumatized and this guy singlehandedly destroy one.
Gavin’s execution, it’s too painful to read.

I can totally understand if the MC suffering mental illness with these chain of events and non-sense responsibility. :sweat_smile:

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Yeah the mental stat adds unique way to play with the three life paths. I like picking the 2 life path if I’m going as stoic conquer.

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Hey dude, thanks!

It has gotten bigger, so much bigger in fact that I created a character search function lol! Still very wonky but itll get better refined further down the line! I really wish Choicescript could make a function that works as a hyperlink that moves you to the relevant Codex article. Shit would be a godsend to me.

Hope you like the upcoming Great Rewrite!!! I’ve worked hard on that son of a bitch :joy: itll release here soon, not sure how soon, but im beginning to see the light at the end of the tunnel for this arc at last haha

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Hi new to the forum, how do i play wip games, do i need to be giving premission by the author first is there a program I need to sign up for

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Nah you just need to have a working link to any game available to be able to play it.

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No, you just need to have a link for each wip to be able to play it.

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Loved the long childhood. Although i loved ramiel’s introduction in the first version. it was something else. this version’s is good in it’s own right, keeping it tamed and grounded and then i’m assuming a big bang.

I played it long ago. Had been my favourite in dashingdon since.

Can’t wait for the routes to be open. Can’t wait to see the past retelling :fire:

for new players- check out the cogdemos link in (demo link→) for revised version

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What’s the age difference between mc and their siblings? And how old are the parents at the start?

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Holy shit, my bad guys @Morphine @Silver_Apple This is the new demo lol

The game’s Relationship tab tells you when the every character is born, and the game starts at 601 A.L. so you can do the math from there. Off the top of my head i dont remember, but Uriel is early 20’s and Adelina is mid 20’s. Siblings i couldnt tell ya right now. Its hot as fuck outside here at Phoenix lol

I’ve also put new links above to other versions of the demo, and a link to the personality quiz made for KaE.

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Hope in the future there choice to be more rebellious. I feel we too confirming with our parent and not having any conflict with our siblings

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The speed is faster than the previous version, I’m looking forward to the next update.

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Ok, to things I found…
First, when you select hair colour, if they aren’t say it’s same as Juliette’s (and give you +1 to lookslikejuliette), but if you doesn’t look Belthean game give mention Juliette’s skin and hair colour… So if you for example looks like Jelaythan, gave tell you that Juliette had black hair, but when you choose blond air, game asume Juliette was blond.

When you go see a debate (west), game set ā€œexploresouthā€ variable instead of ā€œexplorewestā€, which lead to possibility of father asking you about execution, while going to see execution (south) doesn’t set any variable. Which lead to possibility of your father asking you about execution, when you didn’t saw it or not asking when you saw it.

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Aw dude, I feel like such a dick omg I thought I replied to this already!

Thanks for finding that 2nd weird lil error, and most importantly, reporting it!

As for the first one, that’s weird. Ill take a look at it and see if that’s been fixed already or not.

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I don’t know why i feel we’re too nice like there no choice to be selfish and bad and antagonistic toward other people

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Well that’s because its hard coded we start off nice or mostly nice. Its been mentioned in the past by others and flame has addressed this before. So forgive me for doing what is likely a short speedy reply that probally screws up explaining lol.

The general idea is the MC started off in a modern world where they were overall good as were the place they grew up was good even if we took the orphan start and the like.

An are new family in this new world is loving and supportive even if they can have there dark sides or past its never directed at us thus far. Yet world is a brutal place or can be and we can and will encounter that and its how out mc reacts to the world that can see us changing to various degrees of bad or good and what have you.

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After the Caravan Attack (which happens after the three main routes of Squire, Prince, and Princess) [spoiler]you’re given the narrative choice to start being more ruthless, as your purpose (and what the future will bring about if you fail) will be revealed.

You’re a Messianic figure in this story, and you will choose what favor (Traditional Isekai Hero, Lisan Al Gaib, or Anakin Skywalker) The loving support of your family contrasted with you possibly going down the dark path of a conqueror or holy figure is intentional.[/spoiler]

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