Kingdoms and Empires (WIP) SFW Prologue of the Great Rewrite (213,184 words)

No worries take care of yourself first and foremost :smile:

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Hi @FatedFlame

I played the demo, i want to say it’s amazing.
At first i thought this would be like a standard Isekai story, but i’m glad i was wrong.

It has Game of Throne vibe a bit, that shows different multiple POV and each character is interesting.
The world itself is whoa, it’s very big.
My most enjoyable part that i find unique is that i can feel the intensity of the crisis and MC suffering maybe because the MC is also coming from our modern society.

The first sudden V’era & Demon encounter is really chaotic, Ramiel great entrance and save the day.
Uriel solo against a V’era, bruh, we are still traumatized and this guy singlehandedly destroy one.
Gavin’s execution, it’s too painful to read.

I can totally understand if the MC suffering mental illness with these chain of events and non-sense responsibility. :sweat_smile:

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Yeah the mental stat adds unique way to play with the three life paths. I like picking the 2 life path if I’m going as stoic conquer.

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Hey dude, thanks!

It has gotten bigger, so much bigger in fact that I created a character search function lol! Still very wonky but itll get better refined further down the line! I really wish Choicescript could make a function that works as a hyperlink that moves you to the relevant Codex article. Shit would be a godsend to me.

Hope you like the upcoming Great Rewrite!!! I’ve worked hard on that son of a bitch :joy: itll release here soon, not sure how soon, but im beginning to see the light at the end of the tunnel for this arc at last haha

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Hi new to the forum, how do i play wip games, do i need to be giving premission by the author first is there a program I need to sign up for

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Nah you just need to have a working link to any game available to be able to play it.

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No, you just need to have a link for each wip to be able to play it.

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Loved the long childhood. Although i loved ramiel’s introduction in the first version. it was something else. this version’s is good in it’s own right, keeping it tamed and grounded and then i’m assuming a big bang.

I played it long ago. Had been my favourite in dashingdon since.

Can’t wait for the routes to be open. Can’t wait to see the past retelling :fire:

for new players- check out the cogdemos link in (demo link→) for revised version

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What’s the age difference between mc and their siblings? And how old are the parents at the start?

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Holy shit, my bad guys @Morphine @Silver_Apple This is the new demo lol

The game’s Relationship tab tells you when the every character is born, and the game starts at 601 A.L. so you can do the math from there. Off the top of my head i dont remember, but Uriel is early 20’s and Adelina is mid 20’s. Siblings i couldnt tell ya right now. Its hot as fuck outside here at Phoenix lol

I’ve also put new links above to other versions of the demo, and a link to the personality quiz made for KaE.

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Hope in the future there choice to be more rebellious. I feel we too confirming with our parent and not having any conflict with our siblings

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The speed is faster than the previous version, I’m looking forward to the next update.

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