Kingdoms: Embers In Ashes[WIP] [OLD VERSION]

One thing for sure I will try all 3 ro to see their personality starting with either Melissa or Sophia

Wow it looks very interesting, nd you are uploading it daily. I guess it will be finished before 2018 and will be released if it’s not so lengthy story. :+1:

Haha… Sad news. It is a lengthy story. :sweat_smile:

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What would be your best estimate of the story size??

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The progress now has 8k words.(including the codes.) My goal is to have at least 100k words.

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Is that total with code? Because if not holy cow!

Well, eventhough that 100k includes codes, it’ll be only a small portion of it.

Like, 15k at most.

Per playthrough
( 20 characters )

No way :sweat_smile:
15k per playthroughs are Very Short.
Normal length usually spans between 60k - 100k.

We aren’t talking about Magikiras my friend and the usual length is 40k - 50k

60k - 100k in some selected games only

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Well… in that case, I guess Magikiras is slightly less than average :thinking:

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UPDATE FOR TODAY:
-Melissa lunch scene is complete.
-Fixed the annoying bugs… HURRAY!
-Chapter 1 is 75-80% complete.

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I’m very interested to see the poll results once all of you will meet the ROs. :grin:

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Game breaking bug

Weird…

*fake_choice
	*hide_reuse #"Were you looking for Eadizlove?"
		Melissa nods. "I thought the Royal Garden grows it. I was hoping to give it to my mother."
	*hide_reuse #Cast a spell on the flowers on her hand.
		You tried to recall the exact enchantment, and casted an ice spell on the flowers. The petals froze, making it look like crystals. 
	
		Melissa's eyes flew wide open. "T-the flowers! You froze the petals." You can see a look of admiration from her.(Magic +5 and Melissa +10)
		*set melissa +5
		*set magic +5
		*set flower true
		*goto magic_flower
	#You don't have any questions.
		*goto talk_melissa

What’s wrong with this?

It triggers after selecting the question about flower

It happens if I chose the question after magic.



Got these when I chose to freeze the flowers.

“Your”

Uhh… I hate the bugs…:weary:

First one happens when u try to load autosave after the error.