Can we try to overthrow our brother? Because I’m all for that
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I’m feeling bad for wanting to kill Marcus
Oh wait…
I never wanted to kill Marcus I wanted to take throne diplomatically
And the matter of Princess sofia is on haitus ( maybe I’ll kill her maybe not 
)
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Why would you kill Sophia?
Even if you only want her for her claim to Lucraex, you probably wouldn’t kill her after you win the war and oust Vince and the King.
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Maybe she’s a super evil witch plotting to cook us into a soup… I’d say that’s pretty good reason to want her dead
What? Noo? Shes not.
PS. I’ll be replying messages after my school is done.
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Well then good day princess Sophia
*welp
that reminds me is princess Sophia your favorite character or is she a random pick for username
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Uhhh huh sure. Does that mean she’s trying cook us AND Melissa into a soup??
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She doesn’t know how to cook lol.
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Ah then consider my previous point moot. I guess everyone can just enjoy medieval cake instead. 
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that was alwais her plan!..She was to be to be kind and loving…and when I already trust her…BUM 
…I awake in a bowl of soup or lost in the woods (personally I prefer the second one )
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I watch Game of Thrones and this story is inspired by the movie series. 
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How many enemies do we have?
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The main enemy is Lucraex, but there can be several obstacles that will hinder you from becoming a king/[quote=“SabrinadizaLS, post:217, topic:27494”]
What kind of king mc brother going to be? Is he going to be peace seeker king? War lust king? Manipulated?
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If he were to be king, he would be a good one. He is not the type to try diplomacy though. If Prince Marxus would become a king, peace between the two kingdoms would be unlikely.[quote=“Vac, post:219, topic:27494”]
I’m just gonna give my two cents on some of what I perceive as errors in the writing so far. Mostly it has to do with tenses:
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First of all, thanks for correcting me. 
English is not my first language, so it would be very helpful if someone would point out the mistakes once in a while.[quote=“Bre, post:221, topic:27494, full:true”]
Can we try to overthrow our brother? Because I’m all for that
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Overthrow, kill and betray. Yes, that would be available in the future.[quote=“DUNGEON_MASTER, post:226, topic:27494”]
that reminds me is princess Sophia your favorite character or is she a random pick for username
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I did name her by my name. So yeah, she’s my fav. 
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And now I’m hungry for some old fashioned potluck soup.
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A casual conversation between two people
" Hey @Drakeye the mellisa soup is ready "
"I don’t want mellisa soup I want Marxus soup "
“Oh don’t do that thing with your eyes”
“But i want the that soup”
“Fine I’ll add it in Victoria soup”
“YAY”
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Writing a battle scene is hard. 
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Oh why ?
What seems the hardest part to you
Maybe we can help 
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I invited you to a chatroom
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UPDATE FOR TODAY:
-Added the spar scene with Javier. (incomplete)
-Fixed grammars that was reported.
Sorry for the minor update. I spent an hour figuring out how to implement the save system in Dashingdon. You cannot save yet.
First meeting with King Andus would probably be in tomorrow’s update.
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Actually, it’s pretty simple to implement the save system.
You just need to include *sm_init [WIP title] | 3 on your startup file and check 
the “use CJW’s smPlugin” checkbox on the general setting of your hosted story.
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Tried that before, but an error occured something like this;
title
author
sim init WIP | 3
achievement (line 6)
Error line 6 achievement should be in the top of the start up
the error is something like that. 
Well, my *sm_init are placed directly below the achievement.
Technically speaking, the structure of my startup.txt is like this
[details=This]```
*title
*author
*scene_list
*create
*create
*create
*create
*achievement
*achievement
*sm_init [WIP title] | 3
This is da gaem!!!
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