@Vattena Thank you, I’m glad you like it! The details is part of the reason why it took a little while, but sadly (or perhaps gladly?) there’s still more to add to chapter 1. Thank you for pointing out the mistake too, by the way! I have fixed it and will update the new version with it.
@FutbolDude21586 Yeah, I know the first post is a really long one but I actually noted on there that I use UK English. Mostly because it’s what I’m more used to? I’m hoping it won’t be too much of a distraction, but I can try and fix it if it does become one later though. Thank you very much for pointing those out! I’ve fixed them and will update the version soon.
@sammyboy You know, I actually did not play through that scene fully, but now that I check it I can see what you mean. The courtyard is actually mirrored on the left and right side, with the main differences being the flower patch and the statues, so that might be why it seems repetitive. I’ll fix a few things on how it’ll read if you go back to it from the fountain or sitting down, but I’d like some opinion too on a few of the following points regarding that scene.
(If you don’t mind lol, and anyone can comment on this part too!)
I was quite possibly considering adding a map either at the door which is the courtyard’s entrance. Or I could have it where the map will be available to you throughout the courtyard scene in possibly the journal section or an addition to the stats page. Would you prefer having a map or some sort, or would you prefer the next option?
Renaming some of the paths to reflect exactly where they lead, rather than it just being “take the left path” or “take the path on your right”. Also, possibly getting rid of the stone formations entirely to make it less confusing as well. I do have a use for them, but if it is too confusing I’m willing to change it up.
Or both, have a map and rename some of the paths?
On another note, I am finally done with finals! I may not have too much time today to work on it, but I’d still love more feedback on the latest update, and I will also polish up the post with full update details. Thanks!