A few comments:
"“He deserved it,” puts in Cyrus. " Wouldn’t this sentence work better as "
"“He deserved it,” Cyrus says (or Cyrus puts in, if you prefer. " "?
I liked the sweet RO dialogue moment where we tease Alty, but sadly there isn’t one for those who romance Cy there.
Also I wonder what presents my mc got Alty, Cy and Astrid?
If you have time maybe you could at least allow us to explicitly choose what present we give to our RO, so we can hopefully see them enjoy it sometime later on?
The semester 1 transcript on the stat screen also doesn’t currently accurately reflect our grades from our finals and seems to be reset to 100 for everything.