Comparing jobs with Kol (we both picked the same):
"Yeah! And it'll be cool
What'll be cool, Kol?
Just after Magic Theory class:
fighting? At dinner that night, your suitemates are uncharacteristically amiable. Fighting for their lives together during the Monsters and Rogues exam must have had something to do with that.
The first word is out of place. (It looks like it should be part of a comment.)
"Wait. Have you ever seen a picture of kitsune claws?" You shake your head. "Well, that might be a factor in this. Hm. This might help you have a better understanding of what we're going for.""
Too many closing quotation marks.
Also, it seems a bit suspicious that my MC's mother died the same year as the dragon massacre... and yet my high int MC seems incapable of making any connection....