Just after the fight with the hydra:
despite your delay with the hydra. You quickly find out that most groups had not had experiences like yours, dealing with only low level monsters: dwarves, sprites, satyrs, dryads, and the like.
The first sentence seems to be only half there. Looking at the code, I assume I completed the task in 10 turns, so it fails both
*if fightturns < 10 and
*if (fightturns > 10) and (fightturns <= 14). Presumably the first should have been
*if fightturns <= 10?
"...Why would brownies run a café?" He laughs. "Awe, Yuki."
Unless it's an answer to why brownies run a cafe (which seems unlikely), this should probably be "Aw" (or "Aww").
Also from the code, it looks like the death scene doesn't end the game, but just moves on to Chapter 6. It should end with