Tried a few more runs, im really pleased with the aurthors work, the work is almost perfect, the story can branch in numerous ways given the current settings.
Just one thing though......dont you think astrid is a bit too pushy? her RO is too early in my opinion. (But its not a big issue, i think most of the people like it that way).
Now i really want this game to come out complete , its really worth the time.