Keeper of the Sun and Moon (WIP) (Updated 11/30/17, post 3697)

nonbinary-inclusive
gender-choice
modern-fantasy
young-adult-fiction

#3663

Thanks you so much! :slight_smile:


#3664

Is there’s no date scene for Leon? Like the others were they go to the aquarium or something. If there is I didn’t get it. I did seem strange that when I finished all my homework he invited me somewhere but then I didn’t see any scene for that.


#3665

One thing I am curious about: How is Cyrus romanced?


#3666

That question was asked a while ago, so here you go :^)


#3667

It have been a while that I played this, whos Leon again? He’s the angel right?


#3668

Yeah and your suitemate or roommate


#3669

So far none of the Nephilim characters we’ve encountered (including for me my own mc) seem to “angels” in anything except appearance. :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:


#3670

There’s no Leon date scene in chapter 7, but there should be in chapters 5 and 6. If you’re not getting the chapter 6 date (after homework), it’s probably a bug.


#3671

I think Seraphina should like you more if you’re Dragonborn. That would be cool.


#3672

Also, first thing in my mind when I read Dragonborn was the opening song for Elder Scrolls: Skyrim. Lol.


#3673

There is a date scene in Chapter 5 or 6. <:


#3674

Talking to her after the species selection scene as a dragonborn automatically raises your relationship with her.


#3675

It does? Huh, I never noticed that. You have very keen eyes.


#3676

I’ve finally played as an elemental. It’s interesting.


#3677

@daydreamsincolor, I just want to say, your game is amazing. The unique world you created is fun to explore. I do have a question though. Are you going to write multiple stories covering the MC’s whole time at Magi, or are you just going to write the one about their freshman year? Because it would make an amazing series.:grin:


#3678

@darkwolf76
Thank you!
I honestly don’t know yet whether this will be a series :sweat_smile: It’s definitely a possibility, but it really depends on how much free time I have to work on it.


#3679

@daydreamsincolor

I have both an error and a suggestion:

Error

This is the code for when the MC chooses to not pay attention in Ebner’s class:

*if (thaliarelationship >= 50) and (leonrelationship < 50)
*set thaliarelationship %+6
Thalia is more than willing to talk to you. Kol, for his part, tries to focus on the lesson.

Ebner glares at you multiple times throughout the hour, but that might just be how his face looks. >You have a feeling you’re not doing your grade in his class any favors.
*if (leonrelationship >= 50) and (thaliarelationship < 50)
*set leonrelationship %+6
Leon is more than willing to talk to you. Kol, for his part, tries to focus on the lesson.

Ebner glares at you multiple times throughout the hour, but that might just be how his face looks. >You have a feeling you’re not doing your grade in his class any favors.
*if (leonrelationship >= 50) and (thaliarelationship >= 50)
no relationship bonus for the both of them??
Leon and Thalia are more than willing to talk to you. Kol, for his part, tries to focus on the lesson.

As you can see, the error here is that talking to both Thalia and Leon doesn’t net you a relationship boost with them, while the other two outcomes do.

Suggestion

This might solely be for roleplaying purposes, as I really don’t see a way to make this affect the stats of the game, but I’ll throw it out anyway.

Could the MC possibly have a choice to pick the amount of wealth they had in the human world? Like, someone would ask them how their life was back then, and the player would be given the choices of either being extremely wealthy, well off or piss poor. It’s just a small bit of roleplaying that I thought was neat.

Maybe you could put personality/relationship changes to them? I’m not really sure, but it could be possible.


#3680

@daydreamsincolor

Will we find out more about the dead and/or absent parent?


#3681

Aww,but I and more importantly my mc need to find out Alty’s huge secrets that you heavily implied were present but couldn’t be covered in this game (because they’re too huge and disturbing most like). :sweat_smile:
Besides since we can’t do on the vacations in this game he still has to invite Alty to his home sometime to meet his mom.

Has been suggested before and might be nice to have but not absolutely vital. Anyway in my headcanon my mc would be on the lower end of the scale. He and his mom probably used be relatively comfortably (lower) middle class and then the financial crisis of 2008 hit…
So lower middle class for the most part for me. I think by the time of the Astrid incident he was seriously considering putting his dignity aside and using those phenomenal abs of his to put himself through college somehow. :sweat:

Or maybe not, considering some of the author’s plans for the dragonborn who cares to dig into their own past. You might become an annoying nuisance to Sera and quite possibly even a threat to her inheritance (provided there’s any left of course).


#3682

Perhaps, they are hunters?