Keeper of the Sun and Moon (WIP) (Updated 11/30/17, post 3697)

young-adult-fiction
nonbinary-inclusive
modern-fantasy
gender-choice

#3402

@Moonsong
Fixed for next update!

Thank you! :blush:

@Greyscales
It’s because of the variables then. I’ll have to find a way to fix it. Thank you.

@justme
Thanks! I’m planning to add course descriptions, but they tend to take a while to write (and there are 8 new ones), so it’s a lower priority right now.

@Greyscales
I realized that if MC with a good relationship gave hunter parents too much information/said they were at a magic school, the family scenes would end up being drastically different. And yeah, the hunter parents are meant to be…sketchy.

MC isn’t adopted, hunter mother’s father was a whatever species MC is/elemental if human MC.

Nah, not a relative. It’s just to add tension.

RDJ presents are going to be added once more of that path is written, and I might also lower the present threshold. Just raised the point value for next update :joy:

Thank you so much for all of the feedback!! :grin:


#3403

Hmmm…for the vacation options I don’t recall Alty or Astrid ever inviting my mc before the convo with mom either. I though it was just another in progress scene and that the Alty or Astrid convo where they invite us would be added later on (including my mc panicking on account of having nothing suitable to wear when meeting Alty’s posh parents).


#3404

Finally! Got good scores for the exams!

Plus, my actual exams just ended a few day ago. Exams, exams!
Edit: Stats used for exam *note: this is by the end of Chapter 8, so any stat advancements during the chapter are included.


As for Sem2 classes, for now, I chose:

We’ll see how it goes :slight_smile:
Oh, just realised. Double Ebner!


#3405
SEMESTER 1 TRANSCRIPT

World Cultures, Prof. Chase 
Grade: 100

Magic Theory, Prof. Kerr 
Grade: 100

Monsters and Rogues, Prof. Ebner 
Grade: 87.5

Artifacts, Prof. Jensen 
Grade: 100

Ritual Magic, Prof. Moriarty 
Grade: 100

Potions, Prof. Forett 
Grade: 100

SEMESTER 2 TRANSCRIPT

Hunter Studies, Prof. Darzi 
Grade: 100

Magic Theory II, Prof. Kerr 
Grade: 100

Control Magic, Prof. Ebner 
Grade: 87.5

Sigils and Runes, Prof. Moriarty 
Grade: 100

Anti-Magic Artifacts, Prof. Jensen 
Grade: 100

Magic Resistance, Prof. Darzi 
Grade: 100

The nerd inside of me is disappointed in all of you for getting below 100, but the magician inside of me is saying "Screw Prof. Ebner. "


#3406

Huh… I must be the odd one out. I kinda like Ebner.

Maybe because I had a teacher like that, and he turned out to be one of the funnest teachers in school XD


#3407

@idonotlikeusernames Before this update, the vacation question is only asked by Yakov and only if MC’s dating him. I kinda assumed that the invites took place off-screen (off-page?) until now.

@daydreamsincolor Ooo. I actually prefer the new sketchy (there’s the word I’m looking for!) hunter parents. Things got a lot more interesting.


#3408

Ainsley, my MC, decides to take Sigils and Runes, Telekinesis and Healing and Weaponized Potions.
Other classes are Control Magic, Magic Theory II and Elemental Manipulation II.

Here are my Transcripts if needed:

Summary

Elemental Manipulation, Prof. Petrova
Grade: 100

Magic Theory, Prof. Kerr
Grade: 100

Monsters and Rogues, Prof. Ebner
Grade: 90

Artifacts, Prof. Jensen
Grade: 100

Ritual Magic, Prof. Moriarty
Grade: 95

Potions, Prof. Forett
Grade: 95

If i didn’t get the best grades, the academical side of me will kill my ass.


#3409

It is a bit of big thing to take place off screen though, at least the first time you’re asked to go with someone on holiday, imho.
Plus my mc would be rather nervous and a bit apprehensive about meeting Alty’s parents/family. :sweat_smile:


#3410

Ikr, after I saw the grade thresholds, I was like: Must get 88 or higher! No excuses!


Might as well take this chance for a stat update, I guess?

Base Stats

Species: Kitsune
Appearance: You have light skin and brown eyes. Your hair is short and black.
Health: As good as can be
Money: $895
Job: Magical creatures caretaker

Cunning: 6
Fighting: 5
Elemental Manipulation: 13
Illusion Manipulation: 5
Intelligence: 32
Ritual Magic and Potions: 19
Telekinesis: 4
Willpower: 1

SKILLS

Kind: 60% Cruel: 40%

Logical: 52% Emotional: 48%

Lawful: 81% Chaotic: 19%

Resistance: 24% Acceptance: 76%

Rel Stats

Astrid: 78%
Altair: 64%
Cressida: 50%
Cyrus: 50%
Gisela: 50%
Jarrod: 50%
Katia: 54%
Kol: 67%
Thalia: 65%
Leon: 63%
Seraphina: 71%
Yakov: 67%

Cambion Approval: 15%
Nephilim Approval: 9%
Nymph Approval: 14%
NMC Resident Approval: 13%
Student Approval: 10%

Kinda Surprised how much Yakov like my MC, considering their lack of interaction.


#3411

Seriously… how is everyone getting such good grades?? I picked the “nerd” option (instead of the jock or social butterfly), studied as often as I could and my highest score was 90. sadface


#3412

You’ll probably need to read up on tips to get good grades towards the end of the semester.

(For use with the Monsters and Rogues simulation)

You should also check what grade you get whenever you answer questions (as they change as soon as you make a choice)


#3413

I’m posting my stats too:
Cunning: 35
Fighting: 13
Elemental Manipulation: 18
Illusion Manipulation: 5
Intelligence: 15
Ritual Magic and Potions: 1
Telekinesis: 7
Willpower: 5

Kind: 55% Cruel: 45%
Logical: 65% Emotional: 35%
Lawful: 39% Chaotic: 61%
Resistance: 49% Acceptance: 51%

@FutbolDude21586
High magic stats are important for Elemental Manipulation, Monsters and Rouges, Battle Magic and Telekinesis. High fighting is important for Combat. High Ritual Magic and Potions is important for, you guessed it, Ritual Magic and Potions. High willpower is important for Magic Resistance. High intelligence is important for World Cultures, Magical Theory and Artifacts, as well as all written exams. High cunning lets you get away with cheating and helps with some of the theoretical parts of exams.

The Monsters and Rouges multiple choice answers are:1.C, 26.E and 57.B.


#3414

Not bad for a human MC:
STATS
Name: Alex Wilson
Species: Human
Appearance: You have light skin and hazel eyes. Your hair is short and caramel.
Health: As good as can be
Money: $1295
Job: Intern for Nephilim Secretary

Cunning: 21
Fighting: 28
Intelligence: 28
Potions: 2
Willpower: 22
SKILLS

Kind: 53% Cruel: 47%
Logical: 68% Emotional: 32%
Lawful: 63% Chaotic: 37%
Resistance: 63% Acceptance: 37%

Relationship

Astrid: 72%
Altair: 56%
Cressida: 68%
Cyrus: 51%
Gisela: 50%
Jarrod: 66%
Katia: 50%
Kol: 67%
Thalia: 63%
Leon: 68%
Seraphina: 55%
Yakov: 59%

Cambion Approval: 8%
Nephilim Approval: 11%
Nymph Approval: 8%
NMC Resident Approval: 5%
Student Approval: 6%

Grades

SEMESTER 1 TRANSCRIPT

World Cultures, Prof. Chase
Grade: 100

Magic Theory, Prof. Kerr
Grade: 100

Monsters and Rogues, Prof. Ebner
Grade: 95

Artifacts, Prof. Jensen
Grade: 100

Magic Resistance, Prof. Darzi
Grade: 95

Combat, Prof. Darzi
Grade: 100

SEMESTER 2 TRANSCRIPT

Hunter Studies, Prof. Darzi
Grade: 100

Magic Theory II, Prof. Kerr
Grade: 100

Control Magic, Prof. Ebner
Grade: 95

World History, Prof. Jensen
Grade: 100

Anti-Magic Artifacts, Prof. Jensen
Grade: 95

Armed Combat, Prof. Schulz
Grade: 100


#3415

Does anyone think that the beginning of Leon’s romance is too abrupt? Like he just bursts out of nowhere, asking for the MC to go out with him! Idk, maybe it’s meant to be that way though. Been loving the demo regardless


#3416

@daydreamsincolor shouldn’t a hunter MC be and to enter the fuel tournament? It would be a good training to fight against rogues.


#3417

Isn’t the entire point using magic, though?


#3418

Isn’t it just too fight using whatever you have?


#3419

“…I have no idea what a duelist tournament is.”

“A competition where magi compete against each other in battle magic,” says Seraphina.


#3420

Also, time for my human build…

…is what I would say if I could make one that’s actually good. So I opted for Magician. It’s pretty neat.

STATS
Name: Zephyr Eldridge
Species: Magician
Appearance: You have olive skin and green eyes. Your hair is medium length and blonde.
Health: As good as can be
Money: $1145
Job: Intern for Nephilim Secretary

Cunning: 16
Fighting: 9
Intelligence: 40
Ritual Magic and Potions: 28
Willpower: 1
SKILLS

Kind: 59% Cruel: 41%
Logical: 66% Emotional: 34%
Lawful: 81% Chaotic: 19%
Resistance: 27% Acceptance: 73%

Relationships

Astrid: 79%
Altair: 64%
Cressida: 67%
Cyrus: 53%
Gisela: 50%
Jarrod: 50%
Katia: 50%
Kol: 68%
Thalia: 68%
Leon: 69%
Seraphina: 64%
Yakov: 64%

Cambion Approval: 13%
Nephilim Approval: 19%
Nymph Approval: 24%
NMC Resident Approval: 13%
Student Approval: 11%

And the Magnus Opus of this build:

Grades

Transcript, Zephyr Eldridge

World Cultures, Prof. Chase
Grade: 100

Magic Theory, Prof. Kerr
Grade: 100

Monsters and Rogues, Prof. Ebner
Grade: 100

Artifacts, Prof. Jensen
Grade: 100

Ritual Magic, Prof. Moriarty
Grade: 100

Potions, Prof. Forett
Grade: 100


#3421

Wow. How much time did you spend reading the code for those grades? :sweat_smile: