# June 2024's Writer Support Thread

**URL:** <https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/june-2024s-writer-support-thread/154438>\
**Category:** Writing and Content\
**Created:** [June 1, 2024, 4:45am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/june-2024s-writer-support-thread/154438 "2024-06-01T04:45:05Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 20\
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**Author:** ![Havenstone](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/havenstone/32/198451_2.png) [@Havenstone](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Havenstone)\
**Post date:** [June 29, 2024, 8:03pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/june-2024s-writer-support-thread/154438/456 "2024-06-29T20:03:28Z")

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Sympathy from someone whose post tomorrow is going to be pretty much identical to yours? 🙂

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**Author:** ![mexbrush](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/mexbrush/32/114194_2.png) [@mexbrush](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/mexbrush)\
**Post date:** [June 29, 2024, 9:02pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/june-2024s-writer-support-thread/154438/457 "2024-06-29T21:02:38Z")

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Night session still on, while working on scene I also implemented some logic update to the algorithms of prematch preps.  
To keep it short had to think a bit, will smoothen it later. _Basically a coefficient multiplier for fanbase._ Affecting income for now but many other things in the story later.  
Also while checking my related gosub file, I realized a potential issue that would effect a use of a feat;  
_the stand costs were relied only on MC’s personal finances, fixed it with adding more choices including clubs’ ._

Due to some choices last scene will need more work than previous game scene, only need to work some more and it will be complete. 🤖 Getting some light coffee and back to my editor ☕  
(for percentage & statistic lovers already passed **55%** mark ^^)

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**Author:** ![LiliArch](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/liliarch/32/120749_2.png) [@LiliArch](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/LiliArch)\
**Post date:** [June 29, 2024, 9:59pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/june-2024s-writer-support-thread/154438/459 "2024-06-29T21:59:02Z")

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I’m having this weird urge to write a scene where two characters casually discuss (and complain) about their opinions of lingerie. 🤦

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**Author:** ![Niki\_Christopherson](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/niki_christopherson/32/207724_2.png) [@Niki\_Christopherson](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Niki_Christopherson)\
**Post date:** [June 29, 2024, 10:56pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/june-2024s-writer-support-thread/154438/460 "2024-06-29T22:56:37Z")

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> [@mexbrush](#):
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> I also implemented some logic update to the algorithms of prematch preps.

It is statements like this that makes me feel absolutely inadequate as a programmer, because I have no idea what it means. XD good fodder for me to figure out how to get to your level! Thanks for the inspiration!

> [@LiliArch](#):
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> characters casually discuss (and complain) about their opinions of lingerie

Dude lingerie sucks. XD it’s uncomfy. XD

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**Author:** ![Anna\_B](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/anna_b/32/137794_2.png) [@Anna\_B](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Anna_B)\
**Post date:** [June 30, 2024, 1:37am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/june-2024s-writer-support-thread/154438/461 "2024-06-30T01:37:57Z")

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That feels like Chekhov’s lingerie, to be honest 😂

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**Author:** ![Jaybirdy](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/jaybirdy/32/124926_2.png) [@Jaybirdy](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Jaybirdy)\
**Post date:** [June 30, 2024, 4:06am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/june-2024s-writer-support-thread/154438/462 "2024-06-30T04:06:31Z")

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> [@Jaybirdy](#):
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> So, concretely, I’d like to:
> 
> - Finish the planning phase of the sequel, and in particular to have a scene-by-scene outline to work from this time.
> - Finish the additional epilogue scene for Diaspora
> - Make about 20,000 words of forward progress on Blood of the Living

Well… this is a lesson in humility. I technically achieved none of these things, though some advancements were made towards each of them. Unfortunately right now I don’t have access to Diaspora (for arcane reasons not worth getting into), so I suspect I shall simply set myself a word goal in BotL for next month and be happy with anything else I’m able to do on top of that.

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**Author:** ![mexbrush](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/mexbrush/32/114194_2.png) [@mexbrush](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/mexbrush)\
**Post date:** [June 30, 2024, 7:18am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/june-2024s-writer-support-thread/154438/463 "2024-06-30T07:18:00Z")

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pheww I was working a bit more to make it on Sunday, but as I wrote on the “game development” topic I hit a technical issue.  
_I did it with manual labor and multiples of lines instead of one for now_.  
_it’s just stolen from my sleep near 2 hours_ 🤖

I will continue on the last scene - it’s a bit loaded than it’s predecessor.  
That’s why I also have a sub to put many stats there - so the story will be more easy to edit for my eyes 🙈

But I will not use same multiple choices for such events afterwards probably. It’s too much on one take. What I am doing is a bit much, but worth experiencing.

So I’m some way done, will take a bit more but than I hope to update.

Have a nice sunday 😴

edit: 11:35 AM after some technical jungle, labyrinth I am back on scene contents and enjoying adding some commentations with Patrick Dovonough and George Costanza  
It’s going to be a good addition. I will play it from the start to see the paths for the las scene are ok and will update.  
I will have some rest now but it’s going fine.  
Happy to announce _ **content objective already hit 62,5%** _ it’s going to be a little more since I am laying the ornaments, details.

But I will not have multiple choice for this (can’t explain to avoid spoilers) soon 😅 😅 😅 ✨

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**Author:** ![LiliArch](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/liliarch/32/120749_2.png) [@LiliArch](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/LiliArch)\
**Post date:** [June 30, 2024, 7:28am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/june-2024s-writer-support-thread/154438/464 "2024-06-30T07:28:30Z")

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> [@mexbrush](#):
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> That’s why I also have a sub to put many stats there - so the story will be more easy to edit for my eyes 🙈

Just remember that will break your potential hide\_reuses and temp variables!

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**Author:** ![mexbrush](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/mexbrush/32/114194_2.png) [@mexbrush](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/mexbrush)\
**Post date:** [June 30, 2024, 7:41am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/june-2024s-writer-support-thread/154438/465 "2024-06-30T07:41:23Z")

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luckily I didn’t use them ^^ thanks for the warning @LiliArch or lilipad 😃

edit: actually yup some temps were affected so I played with their contents and did it to the point where nothing is affected. Thanks for the heads up 💯 💯 💯

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**Author:** ![hustlertwo](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/hustlertwo/32/34230_2.png) [@hustlertwo](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/hustlertwo)\
**Post date:** [June 30, 2024, 11:05am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/june-2024s-writer-support-thread/154438/466 "2024-06-30T11:05:23Z")

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10,000 words and change for the month. Most I have written in a month for about two years exactly, I imagine, since I finished the first draft for Day After around this time in ‘22. Feels good. I still can’t shake the feeling that Grandparenting is creakier than Parenting was. I hope it’s just the difficulty in writing a sequel and not that I actually am not as good a writer as I was. I guess that will become more apparent one way or the other when I move on to story #5 in a couple years. For now, well, creaky and existing is better than not existing.

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**Author:** ![DDrum75](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/ddrum75/32/4468_2.png) [@DDrum75](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/DDrum75)\
**Post date:** [June 30, 2024, 11:31am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/june-2024s-writer-support-thread/154438/467 "2024-06-30T11:31:54Z")

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Finally started feeling better about midway through the week. I hate being sick for so long and so glad I’m better now. On more positive news I managed to hit my word goal for this week.

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**Author:** ![Eiwynn](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/eiwynn/32/221334_2.png) [@Eiwynn](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Eiwynn)\
**Post date:** [June 30, 2024, 11:36am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/june-2024s-writer-support-thread/154438/468 "2024-06-30T11:36:09Z")

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Happy June 30th, everyone!

It is good that I have a few more hours left in the month. I am finishing up an in-depth editing pass, which might break the + 4,000 word mark.

Combine that with the 2,000 word prologue I wrote in the last pass, and this last week has been as productive as a normal “creative writing week” usually is.

Now to reflect back on my monthly goals:

> [@Eiwynn](#):
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> My June goal is to continue to run the pre-beta test I started on May 15th and wrap it up in the second half of June.

Done. I have, perhaps, received my most useful batch of feedback with this round of testing, and I plan on using every scrap of it I can so that I can…

> [@](#):
>
> … use it to take _Patchwerks_ to the next level.

Now to the more back-end and unglamorous details:

> [@](#):
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> While I am still laying the groundwork for future editing runs,

I have my lists (yes, multiple lists) now made and I’ve already reviewed and changed some of them. Moving pass 7 up the list to pass 2’s position is less exciting than it may seem, but hopefully it means I am more efficient and productive in my editing.

> [@](#):
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> … the wonderful and much appreciated feedback I have received thus far has inspired me to make some changes both to the narrative and to the mechanics to hopefully embrace and celebrate new members of my audience.

I am in the process of modifying the mechanics of awarding souls and writing changes to the narrative (such as the prologue mentioned above), so these goals will carry over, most likely for a few months out.

Editing, in general, is harder on me than creating. This will no doubt add to my imposter feelings and the amount of self-pressure I put on myself.

May everyone have a good wrap up today, and I’ll see everyone tomorrow in the next month’s thread!

Edit:

For those that wanted to know, here is a screenshot of one of my lists that I am working on:

 ![list1](https://global.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/original/3X/e/a/ea34262778bd9cb800963fdbf1ab3ed9d3ee31f8.jpeg)

. 💞

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**Author:** ![Samuel\_H\_Young](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/samuel_h_young/32/268356_2.png) [@Samuel\_H\_Young](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Samuel_H_Young)\
**Post date:** [June 30, 2024, 11:48am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/june-2024s-writer-support-thread/154438/469 "2024-06-30T11:48:31Z")

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> [@Samuel\_H\_Young](#):
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> My goal for June is to write 15k words of Meteoric, and put out Chapter Three on the demo.

In June, I wrote 10k words which was below my goal, but I’m still reasonably happy with it. I also put out Chapter Three of Meteoric like I wanted to, and got some good, actionable feedback

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**Author:** ![mexbrush](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/mexbrush/32/114194_2.png) [@mexbrush](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/mexbrush)\
**Post date:** [June 30, 2024, 1:28pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/june-2024s-writer-support-thread/154438/470 "2024-06-30T13:28:01Z")

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I know I’m posting lot lately 😅 but after 3:00 last night I started working on it again on 10:00 am.

```choicescript
Since then since small breaks I am working. Found so many bugs and fixing them. 
Some easy ones like gender = "male" which should be "Male" etc.

Tracking the subs so I spent a lot of time to understand why orders on scenes were mixing. Found that and solved as well. Thanks to quick test order tracking and random tests.
Side path checkings are on progress. I will probably do check, update and rest for a while.

```

> **Bug solutions**
>
> After the update I will add bugs and solutions with samples, starting with the one who drove me crazy .

Hope to publish today. Cheers^^

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**Author:** ![Sailingshells](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/sailingshells/32/196455_2.png) [@Sailingshells](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Sailingshells)\
**Post date:** [June 30, 2024, 1:59pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/june-2024s-writer-support-thread/154438/471 "2024-06-30T13:59:27Z")

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I only have one more scene to finish before my game has a fully completed first draft 😃 After that I’ve got a bunch of editing items, and then it’ll be beta-time. I was kind of hoping to get the draft finished this weekend to end June with, but I’m exhausted from all the writing I did this week and have people coming over today, so I think I’m going to give myself a much-needed break and aim to finish it in the next 3 days.

Congrats to everyone on their June progress!

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**Author:** ![HarrisPS](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/harrisps/32/240120_2.png) [@HarrisPS](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/HarrisPS)\
**Post date:** [June 30, 2024, 2:48pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/june-2024s-writer-support-thread/154438/472 "2024-06-30T14:48:13Z")

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Here’s my monthly release and update digest for June! Well done to everyone who’s made something this month, whether you’ve shared it publicly or not.

**Choice of Games Release:**

- [Unsupervised](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/unsupervised-once-you-were-a-sidekick-now-you-kick-ass/154996) by Lucas Zaper and Morton Newberry

**Hosted Games Release:**

- [EXODUS: Climate Activist](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/exodus-climate-activist-become-an-activist-as-you-take-down-polluters/154692) by Daniel Stephenson

**Neo-Twiny Jam Games**

- [All I Am Is This](https://letifoxcat.itch.io/all-i-am-is-this) by Leticia Fox
- [Temporal Thief: Part I](https://jaciaa.itch.io/temporal-thief-part-1) and [Temporal Thief: Part II](https://itch.io/jam/neo-twiny-jam-24/rate/2796114) by @Jacic

**New Choice of Games WIP:**

- [Gigantea: Age of Rot](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/gigantea-age-of-rot-wip-first-three-chapters-90k/155027) by @Stewart_Baker

**New Heart’s Choice WIP:**

- [Dance of the Night: A Vampire Romance](https://dashingdon.com/play/dashcasey/dance-of-the-night-a-vampire-romance/mygame/) by @Dash

**New Hosted Games/Hobby WIPs:**

- [A Shriek of Ash and Fire](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/a-shriek-of-ash-and-fire-wip-66k-9th-june-2024/154814) by @NumberedEntity
- [A Sun Asunder](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/a-sun-asunder-post-apocalyptic-survival-wip-18k/154822) by @Nax_00
- [Brain Death - An Oracle’s End](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/brain-death-an-oracles-end-wip/155352) by @NeonyRicey
- [Dangerous Games: Kindred Spirits](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/dangerous-games-kindred-spirits/155613) by @Kelse_DeAngelo
- [Dark Justice - A Vigilante Tale](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/wip-dark-justice-a-vigilante-tale-prologue-completed-25k-words/155287) by @Reiner
- [Eldritch Tales: Inheritance](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/eldritch-tales-inheritance-cosmic-horror-haunted-house-romance-wip/154740) by @Dariel
- [Independence or Death: Part One](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/wip-independence-or-death-part-one-16-5k-kingdom-building-politics/154959) by @HerbertCV
- [Luuckey United F.C.](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/sports-genre-luuckey-united-f-c-wip-updated-30-06-2024-36k/78645) by @mexbrush
- [NEON: 0](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/neon-0-wip-06-01-2024/154436) by @UndescribedNight
- [Project Xavier](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/project-xavier-06-02-24/154526) by @UndescribedNight
- Shadows of Azura by @Reiner
- [Stygian - Elves of Darkest Night](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/wip-stygian-elves-of-darkest-night/154718) by @Sylents
- [The Catalyst](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/wip-the-catalyst-working-title-14k-words/155560) by @Rhea_Johnson
- [The Devil’s Privilege](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-devils-privilege-wip-20k-words-excl-code/155699) by @FableForge
- [The Horizon Incident](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-horizon-incident-wip/154843) by @T_Chaney

**Choice of Games WIP Updates:**

- [Hexfinder](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/hexfinder-wip-play-chapters-1-10-now-with-chapter-save-checkpoints/85252/140) by @PParrish
- [Magehunter: Phoenix Flame](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/magehunter-phoenix-flame-developer-diary-demo-5-0-out-now/117362) by @Whitelocke
- [The Last Scion](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/first-bull-run-completed-demo-84-000-words/149155) by @dgprector

**Hosted Games/Hobby WIP Updates:**

- [Citadel](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/citadel-wip-updated-6-29-2024-public-demo-a-medical-drama-with-romance/92450) by @bouncyball
- [College Tennis](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/college-tennis-origin-story-wip-updated-21-dec-23-468k-words/109879) by @burninglights
- [Echoes of Kingdom: The Last Stand](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/echoes-of-kingdom-the-last-stand-wip-updated-27-6-24-110k-words/148052) by @YHGS
- [Era of the Archdemons](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/wip-era-of-the-archdemons-epic-lovecraftian-fantasy-chapter-3-first-half-done-6-13-24/149028) by @Sylents
- [First Bull Run](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/first-bull-run-completed-demo-84-000-words/149155) by @Dan_Rasmussen
- [Forsaken Duality](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/new-wip-forsaken-duality/149212) by @Domeztik
- [Grey Swan: Hawks and Doves](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/grey-swan-hawks-and-doves-updated-20-12-23/145158/23) by @Schrodinger
- [High School Revenge](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/high-school-revenge-wip-partial-chapter-4-release-jun-10-2024/37891) by @Sucof
- [Honor Among Thieves](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/honor-amongst-thieves-wip-updated-1-27-2024/104942) by @LeoneWrites
- [Meteoric](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/meteoric-3-7-chapters-32k-words/149491/43) by @Samuel_H_Young
- [Pillars of the Light](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/pillars-of-the-light-fantasy-wip-11-06-24-40k-rewritten/137450) by @lliiraanna
- [Saturnine](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/saturnine-wip-370k-words-updated-06-06-2024/141718) by @Omeg
- [Scales of Justice](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/wip-scales-of-justice-beta-testing-closed-12-06-2024/101088) by @myimaginedcorner
- [Scarlet Sorceress](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/scarlet-sorceress-making-an-otome-csg-wip-80k-words/150697) by @ChanceOfFire
- [Sense & Sorcery](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/sense-sorcery-wip-working-title-gender-locked-female/114163/101) by @Zodac01
- [Shattered Eagle: Fall of an Empire](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/shattered-eagle-fall-of-an-empire-wip-156k-words-updated-06-05-2024/152272) by @Azan
- [Tainted Souls: Fables and Myths - The Bonded Awakening](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/tainted-souls-fables-myths-the-bonded-awakening-unedited-updated-june-26-2024/126786) by @Kelse_DeAngelo
- [The Bar on the Abyss](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-bar-on-the-abyss-wip-198k-words-updated-june-30-your-new-afterlife-awaits/143821/169) by @EshcharCohen
- [The Bureau](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/wip-the-bureau-chapters-1-4-550k-total-words-updated-06-04-2024/99993/893) by @ViIsBae
- [The In-Between](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-in-between-romantic-drama-set-in-italy-upd-june-23rd/145719) by @Daleko
- [The Operative](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-operative-fires-of-revolution-6-15-2024-update/16556/1367) by @spytim
- [The Ultimate Magic Student](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-ultimate-magic-student-wip-69k-update-is-out-33k-words/79700) by @ZCometa
- [Thicker Than](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/wip-thicker-than-updated-21st-june-2024/140451) by @Barb
- [Орлёнок - Eaglet](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/eaglet-wip-v0-0-2a-21-06-24-wordcount-29859/153550) by @Himbeereule
- [Virtue’s End](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/wip-virtues-end-a-dark-fantasy-novel-updated-june-24th/90129) by @Crimsis
- [Voiceless: A Siren’s Song](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/voiceless-a-sirens-song-wip-updated-06-30-2024/142710) by @Fare

**AletheiaKnights Reviews:**

- [Factions: Realms of the Divided](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/reviews-by-aletheia-knights-pistachiopug-new-factions-raids-of-the-divided/146902/94) by Waseeq Mohammad
- [Fallen Hero: Rebirth](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/reviews-by-aletheia-knights-pistachiopug-new-fallen-hero-rebirth/146902/96) by Malin Rydén

**New Steam Pages:**

- [An Unexpectedly Green Journey](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/upcoming-choicescript-games-on-steam-in-2024/140884/43) by James Isaac
- [Fallen Hero: Revelations](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/upcoming-choicescript-games-on-steam-in-2024/140884/42) by Malin Rydén
- [Fields of Asphodel](https://store.steampowered.com/app/3013740/Fields_of_Asphodel/) by JJ Laurier

**Current Full-Game Closed Beta Testing:**

- [Restore, Reflect, Retry](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/restore-reflect-retry-beta-testers-needed/154608) by Natalia Theodoridou
- [The Ghost and the Golem](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/the-ghost-and-the-golem-beta-testing-needed/154040/2) by Benjamin Rosenbaum

**Author Interview:**

- [Raven de Hart (author of Freshman Magic) for upcoming Heart’s Choice game These Thieving Hearts (M/M)](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/new-hearts-choice-author-interview-raven-de-hart-these-thieving-hearts/155604)

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**Post date:** [June 30, 2024, 3:20pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/june-2024s-writer-support-thread/154438/473 "2024-06-30T15:20:35Z")

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@HarrisPS  
Bless your good works and your unswerving, relentless dedication to wipping those wips to everyone’s attention!

🙏

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**Post date:** [June 30, 2024, 4:10pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/june-2024s-writer-support-thread/154438/474 "2024-06-30T16:10:22Z")

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The Citadel has JUST public updated as well.

> [@Citadel WiP (Updated: 6/29/2024 PUBLIC DEMO) - A Medical Drama with Romance](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/citadel-wip-updated-6-29-2024-public-demo-a-medical-drama-with-romance/92450):
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> UPDATE: Case Three - Chapter Two Public Demo Now Available! Hey everyone! Long-time lurker, first-time poster. As a healthcare professional-in-training, I’ve been working on a medieval medical drama game with a healthy dash of romance added. Trigger warning for graphic depictions of medicine, including death. Strong language. Premise: "It’s the not-so-distant future, and the landscape of medicine has been irrevocably changed. Once incurable diseases are now completely manageable. Metastati…

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**Post date:** [June 30, 2024, 7:59pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/june-2024s-writer-support-thread/154438/475 "2024-06-30T19:59:50Z")

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> [@Hazel](#):
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> June was supposed to be my month, but once again, life has gotten in the way. I hesitate to raise my hopes for July, but if I don’t have hope, what do I have?

35k more words and no update for me. Onwards. Upwards. July.

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**Post date:** [June 30, 2024, 8:58pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/june-2024s-writer-support-thread/154438/476 "2024-06-30T20:58:45Z")

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Uh, so it turns out I finished it today after all. Just can’t stop myself from writing sometimes I guess 😂 Leas: City of the Sun now has a complete first draft and is 398,525 words long!

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