I have been playing COG for a long time and now I am thinking of making my own game.
Your Father is Lord of a small town Haven in Kingdom Eastvalley in continent Midtsiden. War is coming for Haven and the events that will come with it will lead mc to become a ruler of Midtsiden.
- Added conversation with father, mother and all council members.
- Fixed some typos.
- Added a scene where you could select in which skill you are good.
- Added new skill Knowledge
- Added a new option outside the wall scene where you could choose a book reading too.
- Added a new unit who good with swords
- Added reaction option with father scene in the female side.
- made a few corrections here and there.
I am confused with some things so I will need your help, you don’t need to comment much If you don’t want to, I will give you the option just select one of them
- The character description in the story does it make reading frustrating and you want to skip it? (Yes or No)
1a. If yes, do I need to remove this part or try to make it short and better? (Yes or No)
- The going to the barrack scene that I added it makes the story better or worse?
- The scene between mc and sibling where two options are given about “I will miss you” fake and genuine one, should I put more options there? (Yes or No) and if you have any suggestion there please tell me about it.
- Do any of you know any application or site that I can use to make a map?
It is my request to every reader that please from now on read both the male and female part. There is not much difference in the prologue but chapter 1 is going to be completely different for both parts.
If you guys have any suggestion or If you feel about some things that should be or shouldn’t be in the story then please tell me about them and if any typo, spelling mistakes and bug you find during the game then please tell me about it.
I am waiting for your reviews.