Invaded (UPDATE 11/11/17)

After reading helpful feedback from the community and alot of paper crumbled (or text files deleted) I have finally been able to produce a prologue!

I figured I should announce this as this can give a preview of my story to the community and I can gather Yay and Nays and edit it according to feedback!

Its rather short but im sure you’ll be able to grasp what type of story im making and can give feedback about it.

Or I might just be paranoid and I want it to be as good as possible for my first upload here.

Anyway, please forgive me for my naïvetity but how do I upload it? Should I upload the scenes (including my own code?) Or is there a specific way to do so? I will post it here in this thread within three days and you guys can message me your feedback.

Thank you in advance COG/HG community!

Edit: Here’s the link!

https://dashingdon.com/go/1942

TY for everyone’s feedback and help!

EDIT 11/11/17:

Guys I am stumped whether to add romances or not (would you guys like that?)

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Take a look at dashingdon.com

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make an account at dashingdon.com. there you will be able to upload the game and then distribute the game link here.

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Thank you @LordOfLA & @Logan3000x !

https://dashingdon.com/go/1942

Here it is! My thanks!

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I am really liking the start of this can’t wait to see where it goes.

You might want to put the link at main post :point_up_2:

Anyway here are what I found

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I suppose the opposite of “Stealth” shouldn’t be empty.


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turbulence


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Should be “By” since it’s after dot/fullstop.


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positions


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dangerous


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submachine gun” just need space.


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Should be “ready”, no capitalization.

error when choose "Play Again"

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The demo still too short for me to form any opinion about this, so I will look forward for more :slightly_smiling_face:

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Thank you! Will fix the errors and work on chapter one! Will be finished around next week or so!

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I’d like to know more about the backstory here, sounds interesting; inspired by Imperial Germany I’d hazard.

I would like to hear a discrition of the game

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