INFAMOUS IF (BAND WIP) CHAP 2. P1 OUT (178k words)

Hm. For Ivan musical inspirations would be horrorcore and grime - fast stuff, brutal stuff. I take a lot of inspirations from Eminem vibes-wise, but the music is an entirely different deal. Maybe earlier Tyler the Creator, Relapse-era Eminem and Stormzy? Anna is hyperpop with very strong Charlie XCX influences with some glam rock here and there.

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It’s great to see so many kinds of music and singers. Alright, next question.

How did you come up with the lyrics for the most popular song of the MC’s Band?

I tried to write an original song but I absolutely suck at it. So, I used Chat-GPT… :face_with_peeking_eye:

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I just use the options in the game. I can usually put together a decent song with what I’m given

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I wrote one song while RPing one MC, and it’s bad, lol. So now I’m just bastardizing songs I like and piecing them together like Franken-music.

How did Chat-GPT do writing a song?

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I’ve always been good at writing and English in general so the words just came to me lol. I imagine the songs as poems bc I write poetry sometimes.

And the only rule I have is that the second and the fourth lines have to rhyme with one another. Other than that I just go with the flow. The names of the songs inspire me- the one about the flower was easy.

But yeah in general I like doing it as it adds a nice personal touch to my mc. I understand how it can be hard for others though, especially non English native speakers.

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i just use the options the game gives. otherwise, my MC’s best lyrics would be ‘jsjrnjfdn / ksjksjjajej’ bc i’m too lazy to write my own lyrics or even copy other artists lyrics, lol.

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Same here. I end up with lyrics that are “words. Words words words. Sentences phrases words. Metaphor? Words words words.”

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That kinda slaps ngl

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Not bad. I liked it.
The more information you give it, the better the song will be.


Song Title: Hollow
Theme: Political song

Verse 1
Shattered dreams in a broken state,
Promises fade, left to devastate.
Empty voices, hollow cries,
The world’s on fire, and no one tries.

Verse 2
Wires crossed, truth in disguise,
Power hungry, feeding us lies.
Bleeding hearts, lost in the fight,
We’re drowning in the endless night.

Verse 3
Silent screams, no justice found,
We march in circles, round and round.
Chains of fear, they hold us tight,
But in the darkness, we’ll find the light.

Final Verse
In this hollow world, we stand alone,
Searching for a place to call our own.
But through the ashes, hope survives,
Together we’ll ignite our lives.

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My MC has a (punk) rock band! I’d like to think their music tends towards high-energy, along the lines of Afraid of Heights by Billy Talent, though their discography is possibly actually quite varied on that front, I’m not sure. Whatever it is, the definite through-line underscoring their music is probably a sense of melancholic emotion, like in Name by Goo Goo Dolls (or most any Goo Goo Dolls song, really).

As for the question about how we came up with our most popular song’s lyrics, I personally just came up with the theme first (I think I was considering, what kind of song of theirs would have blown up the way it did?) and then tried to come up with lines that expressed that. I guess it helps that I’ve written poetry before? And tried to write songs before.

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It’s depends if I’m playing on PC or phone lmao
If on PC then I’m just stealing lyrics from my fav songs and if phone then I’m using ready options.

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I either kind of morph some lyrics from my favorite songs to make them relate to the song, but for the most part I try to write my own which is hard due to my head needing music to be able to put a rhythm and I kinda just started trying to do such thing.

When I do write myself I try to put myself in my MC shoes so I write the lyrics kinda abstract, like using historical and mythological references, I remember using the first siege of Ceuta which lasted 26 years as a way to describe prolonged emotional pain, hello MC.

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Wow this is good, not perfect but alright for an IF! I will also use it!

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Please don’t use chatgpt y’all let that thing die

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Finally decided to give this WIP a read and it pulled me in surprisingly fast. The story isn’t in one of the genres I’m reading usually - and all the more floored I am! This is really well written and I love how you combine all the drama with the excitement of the contest.

I love the dynamic of all the characters and I’m shocked how much has happened within just two chapters!

Love this work and am excited to read more!

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Hope this helps and wasn’t already mentioned: :smiley:







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@Black_Rose the demo is actually getting updated today with a new demo haha so you will get to experience it again later with added stuff lol

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I love to write my own lyrics/speech when given the choice in these games. Also, it is much more simpler because I’m just writing words and don’t have to write chords and stuff.

My first playthrough of demo I wrote my own lyrics, I’m gonna replay the demo when it updates but I will probably just copy a song I like (Don’t want to rewrite it every time). When the game release and I play the full version, I will write my own lyrics again.

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Haha, funny coincidence :joy:

But I’m not complaining and glad to get new content to read this soon! :+1:t2:

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I’m really excited for the full release of chapter two. :tea:

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Me, too. What I saw of the rewritten chapter 2 was awesome. I can’t wait to see it all, and to play the new demo in its entirety.

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