Nyx announces his attention to go back to sleep, but, as noted, is usually looking forward to training. Since he isn’t, he can’t be asked to help with said training. Does that make sense?
@Hector_Lopez Not sure why your post was flagged, but thank you! I’ll have them fixed by tomorrow!
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Oi @PrismaticSpace ya could go with questions ya had put in when MC training with Grandoa Felix 'bout Nyx and few more in the incomplete route, like
why is he always grumpy,
why is a stick in the mud,
how he got that girlfriend grandpa mentioned,
why he was living with ‘em if MC’ parents didn’t adopted him,
would he ever date someone like MC,
did he ever got jelly when MC dated others,
‘bout his past,
why he was tense when he first met the Detective Cassius,
what’s in his files,
what really happened to his family,
why he always argues with MC,
why he always jumps to protect MC,
who he likes most in MC’ family
Or lol can simple play a T or D and tease each other 
My MC’ name isn’t 𝐴𝑇𝐿𝐴𝑆.
Son of a-- ugh. I thought I got them all. Obviously not! “Atlas” is the, I guess, default MC name as it’s the name I use when writing the base;; I’ll fix that tomorrow as well. Also, what’s T and D?
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Playing Truth or Dare with grumps like Nyx would be a lot more fun anyway, imagine daring him to do something funny and silly.
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I actually did imagine that as a thing to do in the future…
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Yes, it does make sense now thank you.
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Hope it’s with all the ROs and MC.
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Oi @PrismaticSpace does MC forgets ‘bout the shadow guy in those dreams everytime they wake up? It doesn’t make any sense why they don’t tell ‘bout those dreams and that shadow person to their mother especially after him saying that he used to invade MC’ mother’s mind when she was young and he constantly invading MC’ dreams and mind? On top of it all the shadow guy even talks in a dangerous and threatening tone with MC. And it looks like MC sometimes even thinks or hears the shadow guy when they’re awake, so they can remember him when they’re awake.
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What?!? Why so many eyes?!? Lol are ya trying to join the weird monster group in your story or something?!?
JK, seriously though what’s with that many eyes?!?
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? Is that many eyes unusual? I can do more-
(also, the errors listed thus far have been fixed)
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Sel_Lee
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To be clear, I’m not complaining, but it’s funny how “got your hair from mum and eyes from dad” options can be so awkward for East Asian or half East Asian MCs lmao.
“Unlike your mum who has brown eyes, you have your father’s [eye color]”
Me whose MC’s surname is literally Jeong, picked from the in-game options: “Uh… brown? Like, darker brown I guess?”
“While I don’t have her eyes, I took her… [hair color]”
Me: “Uhm… ok since if the father’s Korean American(?) there’s no other option for the child other than black, so I guess the mum’s now black haired too?”
// Thanks for putting Korean names as in-game options btw, at most I usually only see Japanese.
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I found a bug:
There seems to be something missing here.
Should hopefully be fixed now.
@Sel_Lee
For some reason, I’m not understanding what you mean, I’m sorry-- do you mind elaborating on this for me? I’d like to fix this if I can!
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Maybe @Sel_Lee means that if a player chooses to be an MC of Asian descent, because usually most Asians (East Asians for example) have dark hair and eye color, having options like “my hair color is from mom” and “my eye color is from dad” sounds awkward to them. Especially when both of the MC parents have nearly identical hair and eye color.
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Oh, I understand! I might have to rework that for the future as I didn’t take that into account.
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This is great! Love your writing and the story so far. Nyx is my favourite and so fun to interact with. Looking forward to updates!
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Thank you so much! The next update is highly likely to be- 
- a rewrite. But I’ve felt my best about this one in a lot of ways.
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