Icarus Effect (March 27)

science-fiction

#1

SUMMARY


Icarus Effect is an interactive novel set in a dystopian reality in a world of metahumans, wherein you have the opportunity to experience the life of a cybernetically-enhanced, technopathic hacker who works with the Enhanced operatives of the black operations division of the renowned international military agency, EAGLES.

As the only technopath on the payroll of the black operations division working under the mandate of EAGLES, one of your chief objectives is to gather sensitive intelligence on your enemies through unscrupulous means and disseminate such vital information to your assigned agents in the field. In the years that you have worked to rise to the apex of the division’s pecking order, you have come to earn the utmost respect and trust of your operatives and superiors.

When a lethal information leak strikes the heart of the organization and drives wedges between already strained relationships, you were deeply astonished and wounded as your superiors instantly turned on you, betraying you in the deepest manner possible by publicly branding you as the traitor. And in doing so, they have unchained the hounds and wolves that you raised with your own nurturing hand, turning them loose on you. Hunted down savagely, by none other than the friends that you worked with.

You had no choice, you had nothing on them – you had to run. Run and hide.

But the people you worked with, they are more than what they appear on the surface. They are not just cunning hounds and shrewd wolverines – these are people that have become intimately familiar with your methods and your own behavioral patterns.

Run and hide. Endure and survive.


Demo: https://dashingdon.com/go/2481


#2

This feels like it’s gonna be a wild, gritty ride and I cant wait to see where it goes!


#3

Oh, it’s great to see some cyberpunk floating around! Loved the clinical descriptive style you used for mundane concepts (namely, one’s own body); it gave it that great, gritty twinge you’d expect from cyberpunk. There isn’t that much description of the world and already it’s exuding atmosphere which is an amazing accomplishment!


#4

I love this already. I will relish the day we are able to exact sweet, sweet revenge on the masterminds. Served cold of course. Like ice cream! :yum:

Not sure how much you’d be willing to delve into relationships wise but I’d like to know how sway we will be able to have on our past connections. Or is it more pre-determined?
(Cant wait to see the level of tech in the game too. High tech, low society? Or no?)


#5

Too many breaks, I understand you were going for effect, but the effect is lost when all you are doing is clicking through a bunch of one sentence slides. I love the concept, but it is just way too fractured the way it is written as of now.


#6

This looks so good!!
I can’t wait to see what you come up with later on!:+1:t3::+1:t3:


#7

I will keep that in mind for the next update. Thanks for the feedback.


#8

Thanks to everyone else who have expressed interest and have tried out the bare-bones demo! I’ll update sometime next week and implement the suggested improvements. :slight_smile:


#9

The demo was hot ! Yes I said it.

There was some suspense and I totally wanted to see how our MC will deal with the first interraction and accusation.

So one ou two things : He trained them so shouldn’t he struggle a little more ? And when we choose the connection between both we don’t have enough inormations. Because the guy is angry and everything and still let us go. So I guess we were close and still we can choose something without knowing anything about this big shadow.

Anyway I can’t wat to see the next udapte ~.


#10

Seems interesting I’m going to check it
Out


#11

An interesting opener, looking forward for more. Needs few tweaks, such as reducing the amount of one-liners, but still intriguing nonetheless. Eager to see where your tale will take us CyberFox.


#12

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