Potato, if you need any help at all in plugging that plot hole, I’d be more than willing to help. If you want to run the problems by someone else. If not though that’s good too. I know all about the problem of plotholes. I’m sure you’ll work your way around.
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@Potato I’ll second what @FairyGodfeather said. Feel free to bounce your conundrum off of either, or even both of us.
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Thanks, you guys are sweet. I just sent a pm to someone who said the same thing.
I don’t really know if it’s a plothole you can just ‘patch’. It’s sort of hard to explain. I’ll copy pasta what I just sent the other guy to both of you if you’re interested.
@potato i want help you , I want flirt with Anson again.
@Potato Go ahead. I love pasta. 
This writing style reminds me of this poem someone did of a famous historical character, Robert William Service,AKA Bard of the Yukon. Anyway just thought I’d mention that top notch writing though!
i played your story a long time ago , back when it was 15 pages ,im going to go through it again when it updates. yours is the only one from my faverites thats not closed. so im looking forword to see how much better it is:)
Jason or other mods: Before you close this, please note that the author was still active just yesterday.
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And today! 8D
I stopped coming on when I started college, and I’ve been lurking all Winter Break. I’m technically still writing this, so please don’t close it? :0
Yeah, I usually check author activity before I close a thread. I did note (with glee) that Potato was back. So yay! No closing the thread.
Wooooo! I was starting to get nervous there!
Your story seems really great so far! I just want to know if the MC grows up?