Going through the demo in the older sections still same issue i noticed before exist but thats allright i wanted to make comment on the new stuff so far, and im loving what i have encountered and looking forward to more.
There was a typo here or there but i did notice one inconsistency so far its during the time of the temple i sent tamu to follow that lord but he is with us when we get summoned to the king. The time frame is much to short for him to have returned allready… so maybe a coding error and that it thought i had kept him with us?
In any case i particularly enjoyed the theft at the palace and the surprize that waited us and the otherd there. As well curious to learn more about that family an the other things that are brewing.
That is weird. Not saying I disagree, but I definitely remember there being a line of Tamu coming back before interacting with MC. If the MC can make it back to Heka’s part in the temple’s show, Tamu certainly can, but MC is supposed to be able to note Tamu’s return.
I’ll go back and check because you’re right, there should be a scene where Tamu comes back! I’m still working on editing and continuity, so thank you for your patience and bringing it to my attention.
Very interesting read, always enjoyed playing as a thief going about doing it’s business with a close knit group/guild and court intrigue is also my cup of tea.
I do hope to see more of this, specialy content involving Desma, I just can’t pass on the opportunity of going on and about doing whatever with my childhood tomboy friend who has my back no matter what.
Dare one say, that I could feel the heat and grime and mild tragedy of the emaciated and gaunt suffering little ducklings?
Yes, I could. Its natural climate of morbidity and rough hewn upbringing really stick to your skin and traps itself in the nether-seams of your thought process.
Sweat. Blood. Tears. Grit and poverty stuck in places that I relate to all too well. I liked it. A lot.
Will there be crumbs of introspection? If not to remember one’s suffering and roots, then simply to reinforce the necessary
Summary
plot reasons of brass prophecy cups filled to the brim?
Being a thief is fun, but it’s really endearing when you’re in the know about why you ethically do some things to uphold some things, and then unethically do some other things like charmingly robbing the masses with blatant disregard as a profession because-because, because-because.
I want this to be GREAT because it has the genuine impression of being great. Here’s to mewling in the dark, spinning in circles waiting for more updates…
The Stephenos scene could use some work though. I don’t get how a guy with his hands tied escapes from three experienced thieves torturing him. It made the protag look incompetent af.
Lol if i rembering correctly his bindings were loosened by that girl and the three theives in question were distracted by each other and not exactly actively torturing him otherwise i doubt he would have excaped. Not to mention his escape was also a plot device to spur a thread further along within the story. Thus the complaint towards that falls flat as stated thus far in my opinion exspecially when its just one minor thing.
Wow thank you for such a kind review and I’m so glad my writing is conveying the environment well! Hopefully you won’t be disappointed with where the story goes!
The demo for Honor Amongst Thieves has been updated!
Long time no see!
I have an update for y’all that will take us out of the city for the first time! There will be more schemes, a few special meetings and alliances formed and strained.
I hope y’all enjoy! Let me know what you think and if you run into any issues!
Havent run into any issues in my first run from where i had a save going getting to see what we have is very enlightening even made a extra save or two just to see different choices.
Will defintly be playing a few more times but wanted to say something i enjoyed the most perhaps defintly the funniest was the recruiting scene at the palace involving sefu and the kallian guy it had me laughing and i defintly needed that laugh.
Loved the whole update but especially last part. Shooting an arrow point blank at someone, no hesitation. I play a very diplomatic, level-headed, merciful MC and even he couldn’t stand another rich guy fucking around and NOT finding out
Curious about the political repercussions of it working thou
Still #worthit
i wanted to make comment on the new stuff so far, and im loving what i have encountered and looking forward to more.
