Found this at the end of the chapter. Possible bug?
@Crow @Ghost_Train664 Sorry about that, I did something dumb with the code. Thatâs where it ends, there is no ânext chapterâ right now. I should add a disclaimer next to the link since I donât really have time to change the actual thing.
@lacunafiction Mostly emotional revenge. Maybe some blackmail. Maybe some huge humiliation. I donât think there will be any physical damage since our MC wants to give them what he got and is not that kind of psycho. But property damage isnât out of the picture since one of the characters might have some sort of attachment to an object.
What Iâm trying to say is that youâll mostly try to get a satisfying revenge. One where you trick them and smile in their face afterwards while they cry like little kids. But nothing is set in stone.
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This story reminds me of the manga im reading so the story goes a guy was getting bullied by everyone in his school basicaly and it started because this chick who he was firends with change and told the whole school that he was a creep so fast forward in the story he ends up abducting the girl and torture her for days⌠yeah pretty brutal. whisper 10/10 would want to see that happen to olivia or cecily
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Manga title please? âŚfor scientific reasons of course 
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Of course its âprison labâ
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Iâm just excited our MC is gonna be a heartbreaker. Ooff the sweet spicy revenge 
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did you put *finish at the end of the demo ? (if not, thatâd make sense of why the game end up in that error.) 
that being said⌠i like the demo so far (though i agree with some of things that @idonotlikeusernames had point out).
i though Olivia was going to give us new Adam-kun statue by saving her lunch money⌠i expect to get 2 Adam-kun statue (the broken one from Dylan, and the new one from her) 
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I read the demo this morning and I was actually disappointed it ended! I was so excited to start getting sweet revenge 
On another note, can we define our relationship with our first father? I feel it would be rather awkward to suddenly start going to the school he is principal of after having (I assume) no contact with him for years.
âOr when you saw Brazil lose 7-1 in the World Cupâ
Too soon 
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Also if thereâs romancing your enemies thing,I hope itâs manipulating them to fall for you not vice versa
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Then break their hearts
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How can I be sure that i wont get betrayed again after I Romance one of them?? 
(Sry 'bout my English, it aint my 1st language.)
Hmmm⌠It sounds really good so far!
I like the idea of the moral choices, someone mentioned earlier, as well.
Would Dylan or Olivia be romance options when we meet them again? I personally LOVE childhood romances, theyâre soo sweeeeettttt!!! 
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OH! 1 thing I did catch as strange in the 1st Chapter⌠The, uhh, âYour Weaknessâ option? Some of the choices you gave were kinda strange⌠Scratch your necklace? I think you mean fiddle with your necklace. :]
Hereâs some of the options I would give too⌠Like, 1.) Run hand through hair, 2.) Twirl a strand of your hair, 3.) Rub or scratch your neck, 4.) Hands in pocket, 5.) Shift weight in your feet. A lot of people do those types of behavior when theyâre nervous - hope that helped. xD
Other than that, REALLY looking forward to it! 
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Thatâs some sweet angst potential
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Iâd propose keeping a more general fidgeting with jewelry, necklaces, watches, bracelets, rings, etc. I think itâs cute as far as behaviours to have when stressed or nervous go and with the mcâs newfound wealth they can certainly afford to wear nice jewelry most of the time.
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Yeahh⌠but Jewelry can change over time. Say over time, the MC got a more expensive watch or something⌠his âprevious friendsâ wouldnât remember something like that. But if it was more of a behavioral act, like running a hand through their hair, touching of skin, or something, his friends would remember that because thatâs what the MC did all the timeâŚ
Anyway, thatâs just my opinion. Doesnât mean their canât be options like the ones you mentioned 
True, but so can hair, and that too becomes a rather less endearing habit when bald and if youâre really unlucky you can in fact start to bald in your teens.
All that is required for the jewelry habit is for the mc to wear simply wear either a good luck charm necklace under their valentineâs day suit and/or a simple watch. Doesnât matter for the habit if youâre fidgeting with a funny fair good-luck charm and a cheap, digital watch or a rolex and an expensive necklace.
The changed appearance (and value) of the specific jewelry is part of the mcâs overall physical transformation and it is probably meant to take a good amount of time for the people who really know about that habit, likely just Olivia and the mcâs first dad to connect the dots.
And good for them, my guess is they pale in comparison to the millions who are going bald rather involuntarily. But this is getting a bit off-topic if you want to chat about those hair-raising issues shoot me a PM. Considering the mcâs mom is likely very pretty I think we can safely assume the mc here is just a bit unlucky to have their growth spurt and natural good-looks come in a bit late.
HmmmâŚif the cheap watch was in fact a gift with sentimental value from the mcâs first dad, or a grandparent whoâs now dead or something then I suppose the valentineâs day scene could be made even more hurtful by having the mc actually falling over when that crown is flung at them in such a way that it sprains and bruises their wrist and breaks the watch.
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idonotlikeusernames:
True, but so can hair, and that too becomes a rather less endearing habit when bald and if youâre really unlucky you can in fact start to bald in your teens.
LoL!! Touche! Thatâs true, too. A good luck charm⌠NOW thatâs a cute idea. I suppose theyâre some people who DO wear the same jewelry everyday because it has some meaning to it, a wedding ring for example.
P.S. They are some people who are just naturally bald because they like it =P 
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I just played this and it seems⌠interesting? Iâm not sure how to feel about something like this. Was there a specific reason why the big tramautic event happened in elementary school? Most people I know usually expect something like this from middle school.
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Mmmmmm~ got to sayâŚwhen I first read itâŚI was slightlyâŚput off by the styleâŚthough as I read through the demo and came to realize that this wasnât exactly the most serious as tales I grew to love itâŚdue to the fact I could easily put myself in the MCâs shoesâŚbesides the nine dads thing kek
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