Hello! We have an update up, so we’re looking for new beta testers, especially people who could give feedback regarding pacing and character development.
If you’d like to beta test and think you could give feedback regarding these aspects, please post here or PM me. Thanks!
Hello! So, this isn’t dead. Actually, there’s another half-chapter (30,000+ words) added to the private demo. If anyone is interested in play-testing and giving feedback, we’d be happy to have you!
Critique mode activated: First off, I enjoyed demo a lot. The characters felt alive and I was able to connect with the mc very quickly.
Now for a more critical eye: i found the start moved a little too quickly. Not sure if the parents will play a huge role in the story but it would be nice if this part,
, was expanded a bit more. Like having a scene for each one with a choice that won’t affect the overall story but allows the player to connect with the mc a bit more.
Hello! The public demo is updated slightly, with more choices as per feedback. The RO list is also added to the first post.
If the demo interests you, we’re still looking for beta testers! We’re mostly looking for high-level feedback (pacing problems, character development, ROs, opinions).