The change to our advantage.
Here is a link to a small portion of chapter two. I’m having to rework on a lot of things for it because the code broke and I have delve into it to see what’s wrong. I feel bad that it’s taken so long so I want you all to at least meet your hatchlings— even if it’s for such a short period of time . I apologize for how short the portion is, but I hope you all enjoy.
The link .
this is a really basic question but what is a fae? Are they elves?
The Fae are very close relatives to the Elves. Just with a few different aspects that make them substantially different. You’ll find out more about those differences as the story progresses and the past of the Fae begins to be uncovered. And the big differences become apparent. For the most part Fae do look like elves… they just have shorter ears and slightly elongated canines (like Maleficent). They also have an aura that the elves don’t have, which will be explained deeper into the series.
Awesome. I usually never play games where you don’t/can’t play as a human but this seems like too good of a story to pass up
Thank you , being Fae is very important to the series as a whole. It may not be fully apparent right now but it will be later. I hope you enjoy yourself nonetheless.
Like you said, the scene was short, but very wonderful.
Kinda wish I could answer Irithiel more in character (polite, but very shy/nervous around strangers), but that part of the scene will probably be more fleshed out later. At the very least, I’m glad I was able to pick a choice that wasn’t outright rude, though the option was available for those oddballs who want it. Very nicely done!
If there’s anything we readers can help with regarding the puzzle that is the your game’s code not cooperating, let us know.
There were more choices that were part of the scene, but I took them out because I needed to rework them as I wasn’t sure if they were the reason that the chapter broke. Don’t worry you’ll be able to do so when the full update comes out .
I’m so happy that you enjoyed yourself .
In my experience, if a choice or two looks like it’s breaking something, it probably has to do with indentation. Also, second on if we can help with the code. There is literally nothing I enjoy more than sitting down for like four hours and messing about with code on my own book, I’d be more than happy to help with other peoples books.
Thank you, I will certainly do so if I can’t figure out the problem. I think I know what has caused the break… thankfully. It will take a bit longer to completely rectify because I realized some of the code I previously thought was working was in all actuality not. Not to the breaking degree like what I originally thought, but it’s not doing what I thought it was supposed to be doing. Luckily, I know how to fix that… it’s just going to take a bit. Thank you for your offer-- if the problem continues I will be more than grateful to have your help.
AHHHHH so hard to choose! there’s SO many ROs, and I want ALL OF THEM… I just used one of those (number?) generators to choose lol
I’m over here crying Meeting our dragon was so heartwarming I love how you portrayed the feelings. Keep up with the good work You’re doing great
Thank you , I’m so excited for everything to get fixed so you guys can enjoy chapter two in all of its glory.
Here’s two screenshots for a character that will become important later in the series, but I’m really excited for you all to see .
My boss just asked me why I’m bouncing around in the freezer making an awkward squealing sound cause I’m happy. I can’t wait to read the next update! Those screenshots look awesome!
This demo il too short i want more it already looks awesome
Why must you make me choose only one RO fir the RO scene? I’ve fallen for too many of them I can’t choose
Maybe if you show your boss this, they will also, bounce around in freezer, making happy squealing noises.
That? Is what multiple play Throughs are for.