# HALLOWEEN JAM Entries \*\*Beta thread Links\*\*

**URL:** <https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/halloween-jam-entries-beta-thread-links/142521>\
**Category:** Writing and Content\
**Created:** [September 25, 2023, 10:17am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/halloween-jam-entries-beta-thread-links/142521 "2023-09-25T10:17:27Z")\
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**Author:** ![poison\_mara](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/poison_mara/32/271676_2.png) [@poison\_mara](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/poison_mara)\
**Post date:** [October 21, 2023, 10:41am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/halloween-jam-entries-beta-thread-links/142521/19 "2023-10-21T10:41:45Z")

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**Sixth entry**

@Eiwynn congratulations for presenting  
_Through the Twisting Glass_

> **Feedback wanted**
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> Feedback Questions
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> 1: Did the first chapter get you interested?
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> 2: Were there any parts of the story that dragged… or that felt rushed?
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> 3: Were there any parts that confused you?
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> 4: What did you think of the characters?
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> 5: Did the ending leave you satisfied?
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> 6: What would you change about the story?
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> 7: What did you like about the story?

> **Link to Through the Twisting Glass**
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> [https://moody.ink/play/eiwynn/jam-entry/mygame/](https://moody.ink/play/eiwynn/jam-entry/mygame/)

As always send the feedback from the game to author, @Eiwynn via pm not here.

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