Guenevere (WIP)

I hope u get better soon >:D< jeantown

Hope you recover

Indeed. Best wishes. Hope it’s nothing serious.

@Chriswa27 @Doctor @MutonElite Thank you! Everything went just fine this morning, so now I’ll just take it easy for a few days and look forward to feeling like my Guenevere-writing self again soon. :slight_smile:

@jeantown Glad to hear! :smiley: Hope you’ll get better real soon. Just take it slow, k? Neither we nor Part 2 is going anywhere. :-bd

@CrayFoPottah Thanks! I feel pretty good today, like maybe 80% of my usual hit points and improving. I’m also letting myself play video games all day. :slight_smile:

@jeantown Video games make everything better! I hope you get well soon :slight_smile:

Oh, if only Guen could appear from her book, cast a few healing spells and then return. I think she’s very much eager for you to continue her adventure. And so am I.

Hey, that’s a hook. The character from a game/book/movie coming to life has been done before but for them to interfere with the author’s life to make them continue to write their adventure. Then when the author gets close to the end of the book, does he write himself into it or somehow write her out of it? Hmmmm…

I will ponder this.

Anyway, hope you have a full green health bar soon.

@Dolphinzgirl Thank you! :slight_smile: I am playing Divinity: Original Sin and it is the best thing that has happened to me in months. :slight_smile:

@Taiho I would love for lightmagic!Guen to show up and heal me. At least I have a good doctor. :slight_smile: I think you have an interesting germ for a story there, or maybe a choice game where the characters start arguing with the player about the player’s choices!

I haven’t played in so long I thought I would do so again. This time I was a total bitch to Arthur, Lancelot, and Morgan, but I kept sleeping with Arthur, so he’s really confused. It’s so funny. Playing this game can be such a hoot.

Hello again- just jumping in again because of some things I’ve been musing on. I play this game every few days or so- seriously, Guenevere has really high replay value and it’s really fun to play with when you got some time to kill, so therefore I’ve been thinking hard about a lot of things. Even ended up having a dream about it, ahaha.

Mostly, just a lot about Guen’s dad, especially since I’ve started playing characters with no tactical stuff and it’s affecting how I think of the character’s backstory.

Since I played characters who always chose the tactical background, and the mentions of having a happy childhood and similarities to her father (with little mention of her resembling her mom at all) I assumed Guen was implied to be a daddy’s girl and was groomed to follow in his footsteps since childhood, BUT when I play the others it just seemed like he just let her do what she wanted.

I also assumed from the game that the family was extra wealthy, but re-reading it, I noticed no mention of that and just that they had a huge army. Though I suppose if they have a big army, they are probably very wealthy. Also I’ve been thinking on what Guen’s dad and mom must have been like. ACK. I just like thinking about PC’s backgrounds, I guess. Though I wonder if more about her relationship with her dad ever really comes up or is important- in most Arthurian stuff I’ve read, he usually dies pre-marriage or in the early parts of marriage, if he appears at all.

It’s also interesting because Guen is the ONLY one of the four to have any long-term relationship with her father.

Yeah I would love to know more about guen past. Would that be a possibility in the future??? :))

Well really it’s hard to have one set relationship with the parents when what Guen is good at is so up in the air.

With tactical, Guen being a tomboyish daddy’s girl who follows in his footsteps immediately suggests the possibility of a strong relationship there.

Ditto with light magic Guen and her mother.

But dark magic Guen? It’s rather hard to picture most parents thrilled with their little girl learning how to whip up earthquakes and plagues, or striving to know how to do so anyway.

As for political Guen? Well that depends, are either of her parents big on the statecraft? Dad might be a politico after being a warlord, or he might just be a warlord, is Guen’s mom the woman behind the man with her social power?

I do like the idea of having Guen’s family play a larger role in the story later though.

@stsword Tactician Guen its same politic Guen due its same stat. You are mistaking warrior Guen with tactician. Tactician is a father favorite, warrior is the tomboy one lol

@thesunfloweramazon I like that mentions about Guen’s family aren’t too often. Only a hint here or there, it leaves more to the reader’s imagination and interpretation. Like you saw yourself, you didn’t even noticed at first that what you assumed wasn’t clearly stated in the game :slight_smile: I like that in @Jeantown writing are subtle hints to drive the reader the way the story go, but leaving something to them to interpret how they want.

@ponku That’s true! I usually prefer that in rpg games myself (hence why I’m happy they’re keeping it vague-ish for dragon age inquisition) but I also like there to be a little more background- one of my favorite scenes in DA:O is when you bring your LI back and your cousin mentions your ‘marriage’ (esp. with Leliana).

Even just a vague question or reference to the PC’s backstory, to show the other characters remember it and the PC didn’t just start living when the game did is very rewarding. Especially if they compare it to their own upbringing.

@thesunfloweramazon Sadly no vague in inquisition i could tell you all origins story also paid origin dlc if you are not on xbone

@thesunfloweramazon Really interesting thoughts; I can’t believe I never thought about how none of the other main characters knew their fathers… and that the absence of all their fathers is a standard part of their backstories in Arthurian lit. Hmm…

Anyway, Guen only gets the “You’re your father’s daughter” comments when she says something tactical, so it’s easy to imagine that a non-leadership Guen might be less of a daddy’s girl, even if her father is still protective of her. Regardless, we don’t get the impression that her parents were super-strict, if they didn’t give her a hard time about training with the soldiers or look too closely at what books she was reading.

@stword and @ponku have good points that making Guen’s relationship with her family too specific might be limiting, but that doesn’t mean her background couldn’t be more developed or (@Chriswa27) get referenced more fully later, if there’s a good moment for it and it seems relevant to the plot. The most likely place for that would be as Guen is forming political alliances in parts V and VI. Maybe people who knew her before she married Arthur will appear and have something to contribute, or maybe she can influence what her father decides to do when the kingdom starts to fall apart (and the amount of influence will depend on her previous relationship with him). All good things to think about. :slight_smile:

I feel slightly guilty for changing the usual Arthurian element that the Round Table was a gift from Guenevere’s father, but I couldn’t make it work in any meaningful way that didn’t hold up the pacing in the early scenes of part 1.

@poisonmara is right that the leadership stat encompasses both battlefield strategy and political strategy, to the extent to which those things are similar. Sneaky behind-closed-doors politics might not be part of the leadership stat, but making public speeches and political decisions, like whether or not to send the army to help Baron Somebody’s struggling village, would fall under leadership.

@thesunfloweramazon That’s one of my favorite moments in DA:O, too. My city elf rogue romanced Alistair, and I kept wondering if/how it was going to come up when she went back home. :slight_smile:

I like your story so much it hurts. I think I never wanted a second part as much as I want this one. You’re awesome.

@Nikmou Many thanks! Knowing that people are looking forward to part 2 keeps me motivated to work on it as much as I can. :slight_smile: