First off, I have realized that it is far too much work to continue to refer to myself in the third person and so will stop. Lazy.
Secondly; @jeantown as an aspiring writer myself I must agree that you should take your time. Work on your writing until YOU feel it’s done, until you are happy with it/feel it’s perfect; then and only then should you disperse your work to the commoners at a time of your choosing.
Editing before I feel I’ve finished a project ALWAYS throws me off, I get mad at the mistakes I’ve made and then take like infinity more years rewriting what I had then I would have before I started the edit; the same goes for showing my work before I’m ready, in fact even more so.
Thirdly: Arthur? Spazing??? ON GUEN?!!! Noooooooooooooo! My Hawt can’t take the stress! I’ll be so saaad.
Fourthly: too many Guens and too much lazy to put how all my all Guens would respond to being potentially thrown in prison, so I’ll just put two for now.
PE Guen would likely be resoundingly surprised by her Arthur given jail sentence, She’d also be quite proud of him for making such harsh decision as she would think that would be something he would be incapable of but she’d also feel slighted that the dullard had moved against her; above all whatever the reason Arthur put her in jail, PE Guen would belong there.
Somewhere inside, A Guen would be hurt that Arthur decided to put her in jail but overall she would trust in Arthur’s decisions; if Arhtur thought she belonged in prison then she surely must have done something wrong. If Arthur wrongly accused her and threw her in jail for no reason, A Guen probably wouldn’t be too offended as not only would she be proud of him for suspecting regardless of who she was, A Guen would recall that Arthur couldn’t tell her apart from her clones even though they woke up in the same bed; in her mind that’s just how her soulmate is, it’s why she loves him .
If Lance stayed loyal/still loved A Guen regardless of her demeanor towards him and the multiple spurnings, then A Guen’s jail time would likely be quite the bonding experience for the two of them (much to A Guen’s chagrin).
@Jeantown, okay couple of questions.
1: Without spoiling anything, would making Meligaunt your servant make him a mindless tool or would he still have the ability to reason but be bound to serve? If the latter, would he be serving against his will and therefore hate the Guen that took control of him or would due to some magical reason (say a battle of wills) he actually consent and serve Guen of his volition?
2: If Fae crossbreeding is how Half-Fae/Fae Humans come about, how on earth do Fae Animals come about? Do the Fae turn into animals and “do the do” with a regular animal or do Fae just come in varying types, and those born in animal visage crossbreed with animals?
I had a third question but can’t remember at this moment and so will ask the question If I can remember it later.