Guenevere (WIP)

@LacetheDisgrace Thank you! Comments like that help me stay motivated to keep writing. :slight_smile: I’m glad Arthur caused some character development for your ice queen. I hope you’ll enjoy the future installments (whenever I manage to finish them; sigh).

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I have a question about Guen later in the series. Let’s say we have a Guen who’s frivolousness and enjoys spending time on her appearance and generally doesn’t care about Camelot in the slightest. Would it be possible for her to ruin the kingdom financially, and for the peasants to revolt in Marie Antoinette/French Revolution manner? I think that would be really interesting to have the kingdom be brought down due to the Queen’s spending habits.

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Question? Will there ever be a chance for a calculating queen to say to Arthur, look i will give you a child but only if you do something for me?

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@flowersloveoranges I absolutely second that motion. :smiley: I have 2 Guens that I could see doing that.

(1) Ditzy Guen, who loves fancy dresses and jewels but doesn’t know the first thing about finance and would be totally clueless as to how her spendthrift ways are bankrupting the kingdom.

(2) Skanky Guen, who also has expensive tastes, and really just doesn’t care all that much about the kingdom’s ā€œtreasuryā€ or ā€œgeneral welfare.ā€

@jeantown, in the future, can you add options for the MC to learn Frankinsh, Greek and other languages?

@flowersloveoranges (and @buggygirl11) That woud be fun. It’s probably the kind of thing I’d go back and layer in after I’ve written the whole thing. Guen’s rule will be challenged as part of the treason accusation in part 6, so that might be an appropriate time to build in additional complaints of ā€œand she’s emptied the treasury to buy dresses, too!ā€ I’ll just have to wait and see how much extra work it might be to build that in as a cohesive path.

@skulls Interesting idea. What demands could Guen make (that wouldn’t require me to write a whole different story)?

@NJG If it seems relevant to the plot. I don’t know exactly which languages might be plot-relevant in the future, but if Britain continues to have any sort of relationship with Frankmarch, it would make sense for Guen to have an option to learn Frankish.

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Guen could make demands such as: telling Arthur to make Lancelot leave the kingdom and never have contact with him again, telling Arthur to stop being so incompetent, or by having Arthur leave all the political decisions up to her ( if someone were to chose that for their Guen).

Let’s be real. Frankmarch wants all the sheep because Frankmarch is trying to win an intense game of Settlers of Catan.

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Also if Lancelot could give Guen Frankish lessons that could be interesting. No strong feelings either way, but it’s a cool possibility.

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@jeantown, what’s the total strength of the in-game British Army at Camelot?

@skulls Good ideas… though I’m afraid Lancelot is plot-necessary, so I can’t exile him; all I can do is make him minimize interactions with Guen (which he’ll do anyway if she tells him to; no Arthur needed). Telling Arthur to stop being incompetant… kinda depends on him understanding the definition of ā€œincompetant,ā€ so Guen might have to be more specific. :slight_smile: But I do like the idea of Guen making some sort demand in exchange for agreeing to have a baby; I’ll just have to see if anything specific and workable presents itself.

@SwanMaiden Double like on the Settlers of Catan! :slight_smile: Actually, if Guen and Lancelot are in a romance, him teaching her Frankish would be a great excuse for them to spend time together! (which isn’t to say that L teaching G Frankish would have to be in a romantic context; it just could be.) I’ve added that to my notes. Thanks for the idea.

@NJG That depends on several factors, mainly how soon Camelot gets word of the invasion, and whether or not they believe Guen is her real self. If Camelot sends out the call-to-arms earlier, Britain could have as many as 4700 fighters to defend the castle (a mixture of trained soldiers and peasants). If the call goes out late (and depending on some other choices), they could have as few as 2250. The Frankish force is about 6000, along with catapults and a few magical surprises.

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@jeantown, what about Camelot catapults, cannons, heavy weapons, etc.? Also, will Merlin participate? Lastly, how many Knights were present?

Merlin won’t be there - he’s still at DruidCon. :slight_smile:

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You know I realise that the situation is a long way away but I still don’t have any clue how my Guen is going to react to the idea of Morgana and Arthur forced to have a child together, especially when it’s the man she loves and her husband and the woman she considers one of her closest friends and allies in Camelot. It be interesting to get to that section at any rate.

Was just wondering… will the gender of the baby in Part IV be the same regardless of whose child it happens to be?

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@jeantown Speaking of the number of soldiers at the Camelot battle, you said the number would depend on choices Guen makes in Book I and the first half of Book II.

How Book I’s choices would affect things seems fairly obvious (soldiers can’t fight in Camelot if they’re DEAD because of the late rocket). But which Book II choices will affect this?

Sorry if this is too spoilery, I’m just really curious! :smile:

Are merlins day dreams actually visions of the future??

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@buggygirl11, @jeantown But the siege is of Camelot is more than three years after the battle of Badon in Book I. It should be enough time to recruit and train new soldiers to replace these losses.

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They don’t have any ready to go, though it may be possible to acquire something along those lines.

Nope; as @OtherGrimm says, he’s still at DruidCon checking out the merch and the parties. Maybe he’ll bring Guen a t-shirt. :slight_smile:

Most of the high-ranking ones went with Arthur. Others, like Merlin, are away on other business or don’t live at Camelot. The only Round Table knights present for the battle will be Sir Ector, Sir Erec, Sir Yvain, and, if Guen choses to send him there, Sir Lancelot. There’s also a small cavalry who technically count as knights, but they’re low-ranking and not members of the Round Table.

I think so, and I can’t wait to start writing it! If only this battle would write itself already…

It will be a surprise. :stuck_out_tongue:

As @WulfyK says, it’s been long enough that any losses from Badon Hill will have been replaced, but whether or not Guen fired the rocket in time will affect morale, which has a big impact on the battle. Choices Guen made in parts 1 and 2 will indirectly affect the number of troops because they can affect how long it takes Guen to get to Camelot, and who might be able to vouch for her identity if it’s in doubt. The sooner she gets there and people believe she’s the real queen, the sooner the call to arms will go out.

Only time will tell… but probably not all of them, and probably not none of them. :smile:

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If Merlin doesn’t, I demand to punish him for not bringing the Queen a t-shirt. As such, is there any punishment for such an offense?

Also, why is Merlin’s carrot so unusual?

Lastly, the peasants in the army are (no offense to peasants) untrained waifs with rusted knifes, right?

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@jeantown @WulfyK Oops, my mistake. :blush: I guess I’d forgotten exactly how long 3 WHOLE YEARS really is (since it was only one year in RL).

@buggygirl11 But it will take three whole years in RL until the battle of Camelot will become playable. :frowning: :cry:

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