I’ve started a new game, with an eye towards submitting it to the Choice of Games contest if all goes well. I have a rather early, short working demo, and I would love for a few alpha readers to cast an eye over the first half of Chapter One and let me know their impressions.
You can post here, or PM me, if you’re interested! And I’m happy to answer questions about details via PM if anyone would like a bit more context before offering to have a look and give a bit of feedback.
The first couple of chapters are up for beta—I’d very much appreciate a few extra eyes, if anyone fancies!
Thank you, @poison_mara! And thanks @Eiwynn for the encouraging words; I appreciate it. (:
@COGZealot Well, it’s not as if I have an upper limit. Feedback that would be helpful to me would be anything like one or more of the following:
‘I liked this because of X and I want to see more of Y,’ or ‘I don’t like this because Z’, or ‘I think passage A needs fixed because B is insufferably dull/incomprehensible/decidedly in need of work’.
Any of that would be extremely useful to me. Just, something so that I know I’m on the right track, or if not, which way to turn.
Mostly, I want to see if the premise and setting are engaging and clear before I pour too many more thousands of words into this game. But I’ll PM you with details and a link, if that’s all right? And thank you awfully!
Ah, all right (and goodness, in that case, thanks even more so!). Just like on the forums, I should think, only in PM form until I have whipped this story a bit more into shape. Thanks so much!
I 'd like to help too. Im always excited for new and fresh stuff. It would be the first time for me to help in this kind of material. I hope i can serve you well.