VariX
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@Misa101 Oh, yes. I saw Danganronpa, I guess you can say I was inspired by it also.
@jaz99hewitt So you want yourself to have an occupation or multiple? Or perhaps, I could put both of these as options.
@lgeass88 Oh, wow I loved Corpse Party. Another was fine too, sorta. Don’t remember much of them though, except the ghosts in Corpse Party.
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Having one job would be good otherwise having multiple would make game too easy and making the story not good maybe but it’s your story or call
VariX
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@jaz99hewitt I actually planned to not make your occupation important at all and just leave you as someone with multiple talents.
Sorry for not updating, but college has started for me again and has delayed my demo release. (Worse time to write a story). Apologies guys.
Anyway, a small update. I have most of the characters fleshed out so far, only thing I’m considering is should I just ignore ethnicity or will it take away the “realism” of the story? I never really liked using ethnicity in stories, but if needed, it’s fine too.
I wouldn’t mind the absence of ethnicity but others might considering how it will be a horror game and all
Misa101
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I. Would prefer having ethnicity but would be okey if you didn’t put it in either
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If we’re talking about what character look like, and their names, then I care about ethnicity (as well as being abke to choose my own in game, it just makes it feel more complete). If we’re talking about what characters act like, then I dont care.
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VariX
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Another lil update, but I’ve written out all the characters. Now I can get started on the story…
For now, I have left out ethnicity, might add it in if it causes any problems or wanted enough.
How do you guys feel about the gender of the MC? Should I just leave it male and more ROs or add both M/F which will have different ROs, but a smaller cast of ROs.
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Misa101
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I would like it if you added female honestly but that’s because I like to play what I am but it’s your choice
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Okay first off this sounds awesome! after reading the premise i immediately thought off a possibly end where if you get suspicious to high were the real survivors somehow get the police to come and arrest the MC
When I read I like to play as what i am and I think so does other people but it’s not preferred over quality of game so if the only down side is less RO choices then you should go for both Male and female options.
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VariX
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Sorry about the late release, college has kept me busy and I was stuck on some problems in choicescript.
Here’s a demo release! Please let me know how it is and how I can improve it. Any problems you encounter, please tell me.
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I am really liking the start of this plus great concept.
Loved the start, and Im glad to see the WiP isnt dead.
Vattena
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@VariX
Summary
- Abandoned by Husband after pregnancy. Hides behind a facade of being strong, can be controlled if trust is gained.
Shouldn’t be capitalized
- Keeps to himself, yet has a malicious mind against those he dislikes. Intelligent, yet does utilize that intelligence for anything good.
Is this supposed to be Intelligent, yet does not utilize that intelligence for anything good.? If not, I think it’s better if it Intelligent, yet just utilize that intelligence for anything good.(you may can do better than me though)
- You finished examining your profile andset it down and took out the profiles from the drawer again.
and set, just needed a space.
This certainly interesting, I’m looking forward to meeting all characters there
. Also, which characters that going to be RO?
Will our MC be alive or is it like where one person lives kinda thing?
Demo so far seems interesting.
Excited for the game to begin!
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Sano
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Gives me a lot of Zero Escape vibes and I like it.
This seems to be the type of story that will encourage more manipulative and scummy courses of action which I can say I’m going to love.
There aren’t many CoG that will reward you for being a truly terrible and deceitful person rather than a ‘criminal with a heart of gold’ or with ‘good intentions’ but I sincerely hope this will be one of the few.
It’s always good fun being the Villain.
Needless to say, I’ll be looking forward to this.
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Andras
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The thought of interacting with so many victims is exciting. I am really looking forward to see how it all pans out.
But i would like to know our motivation. (unless there is a reason we shouldn’t of course)
Is this like saw where there is a overarching reasoning for all this?
Or, is it like The Most Dangerous Game and we’re doing this mostly because we can?
I’m fine with either I just like context.
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@Varix
Bug when reaching the end of the game, and choosing to play again.
The most important thing is, will our MC gonna die?