Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww(Why is there a cap for 20 characters?)
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I apologies, it seems me, @UmbraLamia and @Talkingtaco follow each other on topics and cause chaos. I fear my account every day incase it gets banned xD
What Iād love to see in the next update is how damaging our powers can be to us if we overuse them, I noticed in the fight with Stray my character got a super sharp pain from using it too much.
I adore Vine, she is my favourite so far. Sheās like a friend Phoenix trusts, although sheās aware Vine probably tells Troy and Nathan what Iām up to (sheās an informant after all.) I still feel she will be a supportive character later on. Also because of the MC suspecting sheās schizophrenic and made me wonder if itās because of her powers since she ātalksā to plants. I can see her going off the rails at some point
One I dislike? Iām not sure anymore, Iām liking Troy because of the tense rivalry between us and nobody has done anything that touched a nerve yet.
There is a scene I really like, it was when Phoenix murdered the thugs. I donāt mean in a āHAHAHAHA YES. BLOOD. BLOOOOOD.ā sort of way, itās how her speech installed absolute terror into her victims. I want more evil and sadistic speeches like that.
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I just realised something, why does your Vine like Phoenix. She could incinerate Vineās friends at any random moment.
Ah, donāt worries XD As long as it does not go down the hill it is alright ^^
I try to get that part in as well 
It is not always easy (especially not when you have a cat on your lap that turns every minuteā¦) though otherwise I will think of a way ^^
It is funny to see how Vine is either a big plus for someone or rather an annoyance/someone you do not trust. When I first had her in mind, she was just a simple informant for the heroes, though look where she stands nowā¦
And to the last partā¦
I hope to add something like this in the following update as well, though as I am not one who is speaking sadisticly normally and sometimes I am just sitting here and think āWhat would XY say in such a situation?ā
EDIT: For everyone else, there are only a few more hours to go before the contest closes.
@UmbraLamia another reason why Phoenix can risk becoming close to her, if Vine ever thinks of betraying her, fire powers have a huge advantage over plants.
Vine could play the part of a hero losing it at some point since her personality is so unstable. We all need a loose cannon every now and then.
Is it weird that Iām incredibly excited for the contest results?
Phoenix is like, bananas as shit, man.
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Best part? Phoenix IS mentally unstable too 
She did name her guns after butts after all.
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Thatās not unstable just childish.
Oh, I dunnoā¦ even kids probably wouldnĀ“t name a gun after their crack line.
TheyĀ“d come up with stuff like āpain bringerā or āDeath gunā.
Anyyyyywwaayā¦ @Nekumura as of nowā¦ how many favorites do you have on the contestā¦?
@UmbraLamia Okay? I didnĀ“t remember if she had mentioned it before, and I didnĀ“t wanna go through the +1000 posts to find out.
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I think she mentioned this before, donāt ask. 
I think she mentioned a week ago that she had a favourite closely followed by another character.
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Because her mind is still that of a 15 year old and most of her life she grew to resent her parents, sheās very childish too. Itās why she hates Troy, because he replaced her.
Techinally a mind of a 16 year old. And I guess even then she should have some maturity.
She mentioned that she wonāt say at least until the thing ends.
Oh I see, I guess IĀ“ll just have toā¦ waitā¦ this is gonna be a long dayā¦
@Nekumura are you going to announce the winner in this Thread or are you just going to PM the winner?
Okay, I just came back from shopping, so I will tell you guys a bit.
First off, I have a few favorites by now.
4 in total to be direct. Who they are, I wonāt tell, though all of them have different abilities.
The original 2 are still in there (with original 2 I mean the 2 that were my favorites from last time)
In around 6-7 hours I will announce the winner on this thread, and you guys will all know who the winner is and who the runner-ups were. I might be inclined to add one or two of the runner-ups in the story as a side mission, we will see. After all, we still have our mercenary job or you might have heard of them from somewhere else when you are a freelancer.
And now, I am going to make something to eat and then I will continue writing.
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That must be the most casual set of entrances and exits on this site.
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I am the master of causality.
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Causality and casualness are not the same things
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