From Ashes We Rise [FAWR / WIP] Upd. 30. Oct

When I first had a look at this few weeks back, I started with only 100 posts. And now if I log back after 8hrs I see 100 new posts.XD

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I found a small typo when you choose Crow to be a male. It kept referring to Nathaniel as a her.

Ahhh… I want to read more. This was a good demo read.:blush:

Love the pacing and dynamic between Blackbird and the PC. Hoping to see more of Crow too

It’s not a typo, it’s a coding error, and I think some one reported it already but it never hurts remind some one about something.

From what I can see the game its self is solid and I like the story so far but what I have noticed is a sudden gender change for Crow if you choose their gender as a female

I think it’s meant to be that way. Normal people think that Crow is a guy, until ā€œheā€ reveals himself, which then, he becomes the gender of your choice.

Like Samus? :smirk: (must… make… 20 characters)

Personally, as a person who has not played any of those games, I had always thought Samus was a guy.

I only played metroid a couple times but I new that. Have you never played Super Smash?

I’ve never played much of console games. Only a couple of times, and only the less known ā€œjust for funā€ types.

I thought this was a well known thing. There is alot of art work of Samus outside of her armor. I don’t know if you’ve heard of zero suit Samus or not. Oh well.

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I think everyone thought Samus was a dude

I love the zero suit version

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@weirguider
I think I got that mistake. ~
If it has not been that one, it is always wise to perhaps copy the part of the text and I will search for it :3

@Bootsykk
I’m glad you like it :slight_smile:
Crow is supposed to appear in the next update.

@Ravenrebirth
Thank you :slightly_smiling:
Do you know around where that had been? I only found one for when you choose to play as a male and there was 2x her in the text, but otherwise I have found nothing sadly.

@UmbraLamia
That is not exactly true anymore :stuck_out_tongue:
I uploaded a revised version of the prologue with more information and more details ~
In the old version it was still the case, though not anymore.

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As far as I can tell there was only that one which you found I just miss read and mixed up black bird and crow sorry :blush:

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Ah, alright ^^
Thank you though! ~

Today and tomorrow are the last days to send in entries for the Cameo contest.
Everyone who still wants to enter I highly encourage them to do it now before it is too late :slightly_smiling:

For everyone who does not know what I am talking about:
Look at the very first post ~ There is a link with a description on how to enter.

Wonder who shall be the next one to hop on the contest bandwagon.

Whoever actually implements Desire is the best person :slightly_smiling:

Ghost shall win and then she will hack all yo wives in a victory hack streak.

@UmbraLamia don’t tempt me.