From Ashes We Rise [FAWR / WIP] Upd. 30. Oct

Nah some people love Troy, let them give him some lovin’ while I give him some murderin’

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@Nekumura First of all the best update! :grin: And i like Troy! So yay for RO option :kissing_closed_eyes: and I killed the thugs xD im a badass villain! :triumph: Keep up the great writhing X)

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Glad to hear that. After the Troy-hate blew up I really feared it would influence your original ideas too much, so yeah for your resolution. ^^

@Nathan_Faxon hey, don’t you dare to kink shame me.

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You gave me perfect ammunition :wink:

@Nekumura but but but but can we give Vine lovin’??

Yeah yeah, it is planned, don’t worry :wink:
Planned so far are the following: Nero, Vine, Troy and Stray.

I need another girl character to even out the odds… goes create a character

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Woo! Better get that weed spray ready.

Y’know… Ghost is a girl :wink:

The first kiss with Stray is him tripping over himself and landing on your lips.

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…Don’t tempt me…

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Something tells you want to make Stray very clumsy…

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Hey, you asked first! (Also Her Ladyship really loves to be in control, nothing wrong with that, even when she first has to use a knife for that.)

But hey, as it seems, in the meanwhile we got a totally harmless option for throwing a knife in his direction. What leads me to ask @Nekumura, did Troy since then started to doubt his perception of MC saving him or is he just really hard trying to humour them?

In size you are With your size, you are neither very strong nor are you very fast, but rather a mix of both of them in between.

You may want to delet the bolded part.

To really even it out you actually would need two more female characters… And I just wanted to ask why you don’t take one of those you got threw at you.

Well, first off to the size thing… how that happen I have no idea but I will take a look at it.

About the characters: I actually wanted to wait till after the cameo thing ended. If there is a female character I like and take for the story, I might add her also to the RO list. Then I only would need to create one :wink:
Otherwise, I agree that I would need 2 ^^

Troy is actually someone who wants to get along with everyone, though it does not work all the time. (See the maybe-punching-scene)

Depending on what will happen in the story now, though, Troy will either try to get you on his side or will either try to get you out of the way, duh.

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Troy already doesn’t like me, well more of fears me. Will being a factor of Anti-Hero or Villain have an effect on Troy’s friend-o-meter?

Yep, it will change depending on your actions (not just because of what you did to him, but to the others as well)

He will most likely want me to sod off then xD I’ll just be really patronising.

I actually meant that as question, why he still reacts the same after MC asked him about the scar as if MC did throw a knife at him, that’s what I mean with humoring. In the sense of "That’s beside the point.“ But the subtext actually is: Aw, come on I know you’re not that evil. You saving me is a really fond memory of mine but I don’t want to drive you up the wall, because I need your help. Is that about right? Or is it more I’m not that sure anymore if you really wanted to help me or kill me and just had a bad aim

I have not punch him and yay people can now leave troy alone

I’m never leaving Troy alone. I’m going to use Troy to get revenge on Crow. Maybe get Troy here to betray Crow in the worst possible way…

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@Sammysam
Ah oh well.
If you see is like this, it is rather the

answer. Troy is not really sure if the MC, despite the fact that he/she might have helped or not, is really a person that is save or if he should be wary and keep an eye out for the MC in case the MC is attacking.

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Is crow (partially?) responsible for our state?

By the way, if crow is female, the first line after that choice crow is a woman not a women

When introducing Troy at Coleson’s home. When stating that Crow’s family lived at other side of earth, better to use they than those.

When you first see signs of Stray, a paragraph is cut and pushed two lines down.

Using mobile here

@UmbraLamia
Eh, where exactly?

EDIT: Ah, Thank you :slightly_smiling:
Fixed it and will upload the new version in a second.

@PhoenixReborn
No, Crow has nothing to do with that.

EDIT:
I included Glamour’s, Nero’s and Lucian’s bio now as well.