I agree with those above, why would I hate Troy so much? Envy, yes, hate, no. And did I really kill all those people back at the lab when I broke out? Yikes. If so, can I at least feel bad over it, having not been in complete control at the time, what with new powers and all? Pretty please?
Overall, I would like a little bit more input now and then, mostly having a say regarding how I feel about the other characters (such as Troy), at the moment it is a lot of reading between actual choices. Not bad reading, mind you, I merely wish to be more part of the story. Because I really like the story!
Shit-chat, yes, let’s talk some crap.
Oh, and yes, Troy, potential RO, I would not mind. I feel a little bit like Catwoman playing this, given the choice to be a anti-hero. Really want to see this one come to fruition, full bloom. Keep at it, please!
Me and Vine are BFFs, that’s going to happen. How I picture most of our chats:
Phoenix: HISS GROWL I HATE BLACKBIRD RAWR GRRR.
Vine: caresses me like an upset child and pats my head that’s it, sweetie. Tell me all about the big bad birdy.
On other notes, the thug scene was very satisfying because it was the first scene where I felt like I was taking my first baby steps to villainy (even though from descriptions, I was already a successful villain.)
You’ll find this surprising but I didn’t assault Troy, I just declined his offer xD I’m not going to result to cheap hits on him because I want to earn the achievement of hurting him. Like the knife scene wasn’t suppose to kill him, it was to warn him And I want to do my own investigation without them. I do find it interesting how he nor Nathan know for sure about my powers, that’s a card I’d like to hold close to my chest for now.
Stray is like some Daredevil thief. He must be powered by using heightened senses or echo-location since he’s blind. That fight was pretty sweet.
It’s interesting to see how different people feel about Troy. Honestly, now that “we” talked with him I am somewhat ok with him. Still don’t like him, he took my identity.
So who took the option of killing the thugs? The MC’s comments were the best there. The sweet power of evil~.
The option of punching Troy then accepting… When I saw that option I just had to take it . My MC is looking out for her finances haha
Well since their technically looking for your character (unless I misread) go through with helping them and when they give up reveal yourself like “I was here all along” goes to open door but trips over cape and smashes through it instead “meant to do that”
No, that powder that he threw at your face made you act like him gets out of rubble of smashed door “I best be running, toodles” trips over broken door piece getting impaled by another bit of door “Aw crap ‘wood’ you help me?”
Okay, good morning guys yawns
It’s… 'looks at clock’ …8am here and I will take a look at the horrendous typos immediately.
God, I can’t believe I missed something like ‘shit-chat’…
I read that whole part two times yesterday and only noticed it when I was going to sleep (I played the demo once more…)
And I also wrote to ‘bag’ ‘back’ once… sighs
On another note,
Thank you very much for everything and for the lovely comments
@Sammysam cough I am around 1.65 cough ^^
Though yeah, somehow I can agree with that. I should make a difference there with male/female. I can fix that in a few seconds.
I will see what I come up with the reaction towards the other NPC’s. I was first going on about the evil part and one thing led to the other and I might got carried away. °^^ As I need to get over the thing anyway a few times I would say, I can look for something more fitting there as well.
@Taylor_Enean
I will take a closer look at the choices I am not thaaat good making the right ones (huh, figures) though I will think of a few that will let give you a ‘more-part-of-the-story-feeling’… At least I hope so
On a different side note, I will all of that after I got out into the frigid morning air to shovel away the snow… wuhray for being the only person in the house who still has holidays. sighs
I hope we get an awesome villain mission like where we have to steal a very expensive vase gets past hundreds of invisible laser’s like a badass ninja “well, time to steal this beauty” trips and hits pedestal which the vase is sitting on causing it to fall and smash “dammit stray why’d I take you as a mentor” goes to run forgetting about the lasers but trips and falls through them without touching them
Pardon me for going off on a risqué tangent, but… Oh dear me, that is not the proper way to get wood at all.
@Nekumura
I cannot ask for more, thank you. Now, if it is too much of a bother, then please don’t let it get in your way of writing your story as you want it.
MC: “first off I’m over here and secondly why are we playing hide and seek anyway?”
Stray: “its to teach you how to watch out for your surroundings, listen to your surroundings, know where everything is just by imagining it turns around and walks into a wall see this is what happens when you don’t pay attention”
Oh dear, now I started a conversation with Stray being clumsy. shrugs Whatever, nothing new here. ^^
I at least hope he has insurance. Getting impaled by wood is rather… new.
@tooweiss
Evil cliffhangers are evil… Hadn’t I said that to someone else before? Huh, well, whatever. Raises hand
I killed the thugs Repeatedly.
And about the option with punching Troy on the rooftops… I just felt it would be funny. Mh ~
Oh, also!
Has anyone noticed the three little secrets in the game so far?
It is not much, but two are worth a little chuckle ^^
And I want to do my own investigation without them. I do find it interesting how he nor Nathan know for sure about my powers, that’s a card I’d like to hold close to my chest for now.
. My MC is looking out for her finances haha
I am not thaaat good making the right ones (huh, figures) though I will think of a few that will let give you a ‘more-part-of-the-story-feeling’… At least I hope so 
