From Ashes We Rise [FAWR / WIP] Upd. 30. Oct

Well, this is not the most random thing, but pretty close to it.
Welcome to the club!

<— does not even care anymore

And yay for 800 posts!

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I don’t hate troy I’m OK with the guy he’s innocent everybody should give him a chance

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If the options available in going to under up beating him up first then seeing if he’s a OK guy XD

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I saw the words “I” and “hate Troy” in that sentence so that means you hate troy (100% true logic)

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So can the character we create become love interests for the MC?

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Where does all this Troy hate even come from? o_o I mean if it’s anger that he’s now Blackbird and that was “our” thing why aren’t people angry at Crow? I mean he/she was the one who had the final say in who gets to be Blackbird. Which is also why my MC is mostly jealoux of Troy and feels betrayed by/is upset with Crow.

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He or she can, yes.
It is just a tad difficult to make that happen (in my opinion, at least)
I can’t promise anything, but I can see what I can do there.

@Ventura
Well, I am not exactly sure about that. It just… happened?
I tried to talk this out of these guys, but… yay, I tried and failed! :cry:

I don’t hate Troy!:grin:

Are we gonna be able to evolve our power?

Trust me here when I say I tryed to the voice of reason and also failed

New update is up!
Please tell me what you think of it and If you find any mistakes or anything else that is wrong, just tell me :slightly_smiling:

For the future, I am going to create character biographies where you can read more about the characters of the story and the MC himself.

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That was fun XD, I decided to help at the end… Then punched troy in the face :slightly_smiling:

sooooooooooooooo what’s knew in the up date cause it killed me seeing the cliff-hanger at the end lol

I loved it I killed them people trying to get my money and I call myself Firedarknes

ooooooooooowwwwwwwwwww yeah am loving this even more but I want to go full bad guy have my private army that would be bad ass since am a bad guy and full on MERC lol

So you ask us to hate Troy less and then you let us punch him?
Getting mixed signals here.
Well, loved the update anyway :smile:

I like the update I bet the troy haters punch him

Meh, started with fun and in the end blew up to about 300 post dedicated to the best ways to kill Troy…mostly driven on loudly by…certain people…come on I don’t need to mention names, we already do know who I mean. :smirk: But it gets a little bit boring. I mean I’m always in for something sadistic, but by now it’s a little bit repetitive, for a character we know not much about. Poor guy really never had a chance. :weary:

Well, at least you didn’t crushed my hopes completely, yet…

  • Unsuspiciously throws some cupcakes @Nekumura to put more weight on the will-be-side*

And I like the new content. Especially chit-chat/brawl with Stray.

@Talkingtaco stop complaining, will you! You got what you wanted from the beginning :laughing:

Though…I know you changed the describtions considering body type, because somebody complained about the mediocore person being smaller than Troy and Nero, what makes sense… but only for male MC as the average man is depending on country about 10-20 cm taller as the average woman…so maybe mixing body type with height, may not be that good, expect you want me to imagine Troy and Nero as not much taller than 1,65m :laughing:

Also…I think it is a little bit unbelievable that a character that has destructive around 43 and mercy around 60 would just throw a knife at somebody no matter how hostile they are against that somebody. Hitting, being a mean bitch which knows a bunch of curses, even scratching or a whack on the head, but throwing a knife? With that stats? Seems a contradiction. Honestly I would wish for some middleground for people that may don’t want to play a MC that initially likes Troy, but still doesn’t Hate him with capital H.

Honestly I hope all our choices will give room for some nuances, especially when interacting with other villains/heroes, as working style, personality and aims can lead to pretty different actions. And I feeled a little bit …uhm forced into the friendship (because it doesn’t seem like a pure buissness relation the way it’s played) with Vine to be honest.
I get she talks much and doesn’t give MC a chance to object. But an MC that is annoyed by Troy talking much should be annoyed by her too, or at least get the chance to clarify that it’s personal. A MC that is hostile against Troy may is hostile because that’s just how they prefer to react to people they don’t know that good, or just because they are assholes or like to play assholes, and not because it’s personal. Heck, even before we get the first chance to interact with him, it’s just assumed consens that MC doesn’t like him (even when MCs refusel to call Troy Blackbird could come from bitterness/nostalgia, but it sounds more like an insult, no matter how MC felt originaly about the loss of their former life). That’s too much specific reaction for general actions as a NPC should get. Especially when some people may really want to play a MC who directs their anger/loss/sadness against Crow.

I really can understand that you want to follow the wishes of the loudest commenters, but it shouldn’t come at the price of your writting/the story/ logic/ continuity or the potential enjoyment of a bigger audiance. Especially since most of those comments were mostly only meant as fun.

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When talking to vine she says something like “you come here to shit-chat” its supposed to be chit-chat (I was so confused when I read it before I realised it was a spelling error)

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I have to say that outside of the internet one day.
“Hey dude, how ar-”

with deadpan expression “You come here to shit-chat”

“…”

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