Yup. Same reason they opt to stay indoors despite Troy’s prodding. 
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Yes, more Ace scenes 
I can’t get enough of the adorable canine!
I hope we can steal Ace from Crow’s clutches someday, maybe in the villain route 
I can already see it: Villain MC and his dog trudging along post-apocalyptic Kalathol (courtesy of the MC). It will be like I Am Legend all over again 
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I love ypur wording of details, I never know Stray was taller then the MC , I always pictured him shorter and his eyes wow, now I feel bad for letting my MC knock him out
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Can’t spot any mistakes already pointed out but I like the story. I can tell the MC is inspired by Jason Todd.
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I know I asked this earlier but you think MC could develop more powers as they progressed?
There is a possible power upgrade after the cathedral, plus the MC will surely begin to develop his power after all this time.
I hope this will does not go into private testing
Why should I go with this into privat testing?
With the nice community here, I notice mistakes way faster and they offer help where I surely would stumble and fall. The people here are great and have lots of ideas that give me more inspiration for the game.
Would I do this with privat testing then I surely wouldn’t get such great reviews.
So, unless something tremendous is going to happen, this WIP will stay in public testing phase.
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Oh thank God it’s not because I love this wip.
I have a feeling that ricochet’s romance route is going to be fun as a villian.
So… Not-vine is the new vine? Cause I can’t seem to get the old Vine scene in villian or Anti.
No, pretty sure there are still two separate Vines, or at least a Vine and an Imposter. The Anti path is a little bugged where it’ll occasionally bleed into the villain path. I’d wait till all the bugs and glitches are sorted out before deciding anything about characters.
Hey @Wraith, a personal question for you… Actually, it’s more a professional question now that I think about it. What are you? Are you a villain or an outlaw?.. Secret vigilante?
I’d go with “Mad Overlord Bent on the Destruction of all Neokind” or maybe amazing author. One of the two.
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I am a person with many goals and not all of them are with a good intent. At the given time, I am one of the villains, planing and scheming and doing bad things that those pesky vigilante need to apprehend.
What I am beyond that, is something you need to figure out yourself.
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Sorry, didn’t mean to seem like I was being deep with you or analyzing your character or anything like that. All I’m doing is analyzing your role in the story. You are the main antagonist. Sure, you have some other antagonists in here like Trippy, Crow, Try, Stray, Tray, Vine, Trinity, Rico, and of course… Troy. But you are the main one.
I’m just wondering what is it that makes me want to stop you? The fact that you brought me back from the dead? My freedom? I mean my MC could just ignore you and your activities since you don’t seem to be putting a whole lot of effort into capturing them. Nor have I really seen you do a whole lot on screen. My MC has a bigger kill count (on screen) then you, and that’s with the one who doesn’t really like to kill.
I guess what saying is I’m waiting for a reason to actually want to stop you. For you to do something like create your undead zombie army and say, “Behold my children! Listen to the screams! Listen. That is the sound of your extinction.” Also if you don’t do something evil soon, then E.V.I.L. will revoke your villain license and you’ll have to reapply. You don’t want to go through that process.
Anyway, enough analyzing of that. Now I’m wondering something else. What if the MC’s Resurrection was 100% completed (and is brainwashed) and the MC has a different viewpoint, this viewpoint: What if Wraith is actually a protagonist to the story? And Crow and all those people you thought were the good guys are actually the bad guys? That would be awesome!
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Theyre are already some hints in the actual WIP even if they are vague, i recommend you to look for datas or things like that and to listen carefully at what a certain person say.
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I am aware of the vague hints that Wraith is planning something BIG. What exactly that is, that’s all up to conjecture. It could be good. It could be bad. It could be something that would further Wraith’s standing in society. It could be that Wraith just wants to build the world’s biggest birthday cake and place it on top of Kalathol’s tallest building. Wouldn’t that be a lovely scene. But it’s all conjecture. There’s not much to back any theory up at this point.
Anyways my point stands is that Wraith’s… what’s the word I’m looking for? Reluctance? Disdain? towards committing villainy is a red flag. It makes me question whether she is actually a villain. I’m just wondering, is that the intent? And if it is, can I get a glimpse into the other side? Peek at what’s behind the curtains?
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Don’t tempt me… o.o
And to answer the rest of it. Wraith has something big planned, something she’s working on for quite a while. I don’t want to spoiler too much yet, as it’s basically what the whole plot is about.
I can tell you so much: She’s after the government.
But why and for what, that you need to find out yourself.
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A pizza big enough for all of us here, one can hope!
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…non-poisoned etc… 
Remember, a villain is never a villain in their own eyes, unless it is Dr Evil or such. They don’t go around think ‘Oh I am such an evil, evil villain’ and so forth. Indeed, in their own mind they may be a hero. 
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