From Ashes We Rise [FAWR / WIP] Upd. 30. Oct

Haemokinesis, yeah !
The new powers are cool, in fact I think I like them more than the others.

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Aaand I did it again :no_mouth:

Brace yourself, @Nekumura

Autocratically, you flinch back a bit and rise your hand up to protect yourself.
Automatically or Reflexively and raise a hand

And then, everything takes a turn to the weird direction.
in a

Broken limps lie around you and you can say which wound killed the guards at the end;
limbs and injury

You glance at the clothes from the persons around you, before deciding to take some of them to clothe yourself.
people

It is a young man of maybe 21 or 22 years, black hair and a grin on his face.
In his character bio Troy is described as being 25 years old, but in the story the MC still estimates his age as shown above.
(and there are currently two character bio’s called Blackbird. It’s a bit confusing. Perhaps you could call Troy’s version The Second Blackbird or The Imposter)

Clinging to the shadows, you use the dark paths of the city only you are aware about.
of

A quick thought and you hear your telltale sound of your most trusted ally; your ability.
the

So far, it never had let you down when you needed it and now, as you hear shifting sound of your tendrils creating a barrier for a short moment behind your back, you know that you won’t need to worry about the bullets.
It is really difficult to make sense of this sentence. I’d suggest splitting it in two. Also, an instant

he hisses at you and takes out something else this time from his belt.
from his belt (this time around)

Since then, you are occupying the warehouse.
then you have been

“Let me handle that,” he says and his fingers fly over the keyboard, opening the bios and working for an entrance through there.
to create an entrance? to access the computer? Not sure. The current thing sounds off though.

Not only a few moments later he straightens back up, the screen now showing ‘Welcome’.
more than

Meanwhile, Troy walks around and casting curious glances to the surroundings.
at

Fixed those problems and I thank you very much for pointing them out ^^
From where Autocratically comes, though, I have no idea o.o

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Nope, not yet. If it is grayed out, it is not available ^^

Alright guys, this is not an update, but apparently three people managed to convince me to draw Vine. (They more or less convinced me and watched me drawing her, but whatever XD)

So, here we have a portrait of Vine while she is not in her uniform.

…Totally different style than the other two pictures, obviously. :o

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That’s how I picture my MC except with deep blue eyes and blouse.

This is a" Chef d’Oeuvre" !!
A masterpiece !!

You are really talented (I know I am repeating myself, but I truly love your work).^^

I have to agree with Snowpanther. She is truly beautiful… even “Magnifique” (Another french guy joins the fray !). She is now the official waifu of most of my characters.

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That is a really awesome drawing, but did it not say she had freckles in the game? (or did I read it wrong?)

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:heart_eyes: ooooh… and then he did fall in love.:smirk:

I like the drawing of Vine! You mentioned that there were two others, where can I find those?

Damn, that is some impressive artwork. The perspective is almost perfect. I think that’s the right word.

Why are most of the ROs guys? Can we romance Wraith?

There will be two more girls, don’t worry.
While @Nekumura didn’t tell us, I’m betting on Wraith being a romance for villains.

Wraith would be such an interesting RO. Especially when she realizes her feeling.
Her mindset: “Oh no, help I’m feeling!”

From what I know, Wraith isn’t currently planned for anything other than a Villain. That’s not to say it might not changed soon, though.

Like @Urban said, there will be more in the future. I just need time and the right place to introduce them ^^

Wraith would obviously suffocate with all the feels :smiley:

Which does not mean that she doesn’t have her own little secrets.

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Soo, for you it’s “come to the dark side, we have the hottie Wraith”?

Because I will be honest here, I have heard worse reasons go evil. :wink:

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