Minor note:
I’ve finally got the time to write and am now working through the modest reaction in the Vyde branch of the shopping trip woot woot.
That said I haven’t updated anything. I’ll keep yall in the loop.
Much luv
Minor note:
I’ve finally got the time to write and am now working through the modest reaction in the Vyde branch of the shopping trip woot woot.
That said I haven’t updated anything. I’ll keep yall in the loop.
Much luv
… Elves?
I love to have my characters like that, especially with super strength.
It’s been a while since I’ve been here. Going to try on the weekend I guess.
Found this WIP, and… well, that’s certainly a very cool concept here! I’m really curious to see what’s in store for the future.
thanks I’m happy you think so
Hiya guys,
Been busy, back and forth to work, and went to the states visiting family among other activities.
ANYWAY (hint hint magic word)
Update!
I’ve made with a few finishing touches on the shopping trip!!
WOOT WOOT!
I am done that section (corrections and testing not included)
SO from this point if there’s nothing stopping me I’ll be moving forward with the story.
NOTE: save system is… confusing still trying to understand it.
much luv
Yeah, still trying to figure it out thanks by the way
when you wake up and see Freak: Amidst the Neon Lights has been updated
Found an error when going shopping with Vyde. Didn’t take a pic but my character was an earnest smartass and when Vyde asked if he was going to be ok alone with the hairstylist there was only one option to answer him and it gave the error.
Got the pic for you
It is my hope that the mc will have to face the questions of his own existence, so far the philosophy of the story seems to be is a freak a weapon, a hero or just an object. Questioning ones destiny, ones purpose is essential to any character, because it resonates to us the reader it reflects the humanity of a character. As humans we contemplate our existence, so imagine a being with self awareness such as our mc seeing other freaks in society similar to a caste system consider his existence in this world. This development takes the character away from our the readers control and gives the mc more individuality than any trait. It doesn’t have to be a long paragraph just a simple question who am I? What am I? Such questions define an individual and her self awareness. So far this story is the best story to ask a question with many answers who am I?
Guess I’ve got some corrections to go over tonight.
Tanky’all
So
In an effort to tease my readers what do you think happens next?
1.Silic in a police standoff using a creative dance number to escape.
2.Morrigan and her team rob a bank cross First and Silic’s path and attempt to take hostages?
3.A KRV capture team appears?
Or do you have an altogether different imagining of the chaos to come?
Well, I have no idea what WILL happen, but the KRV capture team? That sounds just like my idea of fun!
(though perhaps it’d be just a tad too soon in the story… rhmm, hard to say.)
Silic dance off? Yes please.
1 and 2 at the same time.
All awesome choices
ok # 2 then # 3 then # 1 all in the same instance
Morrigan needs to appear ASAP!
Would be nice to splatter the KRV team over the pavement
Yeah I think 1 and maybe one of the the others at the same time. I mean if we’re with silic there’s bound to be all sorts of chaos.