Freak: Amidst the Neon Lights WIP and playtest.... last update July 4th 2019

Minor note:
I’ve finally got the time to write and am now working through the modest reaction in the Vyde branch of the shopping trip woot woot.

That said I haven’t updated anything. I’ll keep yall in the loop.
Much luv

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… Elves?

I love to have my characters like that, especially with super strength.


It’s been a while since I’ve been here. Going to try on the weekend I guess.

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Found this WIP, and… well, that’s certainly a very cool concept here! I’m really curious to see what’s in store for the future.

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thanks I’m happy you think so

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Hiya guys,
Been busy, back and forth to work, and went to the states visiting family among other activities.

ANYWAY (hint hint magic word)
Update!

I’ve made with a few finishing touches on the shopping trip!!
WOOT WOOT!
I am done that section (corrections and testing not included)

SO from this point if there’s nothing stopping me I’ll be moving forward with the story.

NOTE: save system is… confusing still trying to understand it.

much luv

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@Vattena did you meant to post it like this?

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Yeah, still trying to figure it out :sweat: thanks by the way

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when you wake up and see Freak: Amidst the Neon Lights has been updated :crazy_face::star_struck:

Herein lies the desolate world of Typos

unintended

unconfirmed

your

3

caliber

flamboyant

reveling

duplicate word

breezy

modern

appearance

camouflage

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Found an error when going shopping with Vyde. Didn’t take a pic but my character was an earnest smartass and when Vyde asked if he was going to be ok alone with the hairstylist there was only one option to answer him and it gave the error.

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Got the pic for you :relaxed:

Some more typos and error pic

your

I didn’t get what the 2nd sentence was trying to say other than too fast to react and “depressed” button which put tap on neck and blah blah blah

ridiculous

It

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It is my hope that the mc will have to face the questions of his own existence, so far the philosophy of the story seems to be is a freak a weapon, a hero or just an object. Questioning ones destiny, ones purpose is essential to any character, because it resonates to us the reader it reflects the humanity of a character. As humans we contemplate our existence, so imagine a being with self awareness such as our mc seeing other freaks in society similar to a caste system consider his existence in this world. This development takes the character away from our the readers control and gives the mc more individuality than any trait. It doesn’t have to be a long paragraph just a simple question who am I? What am I? Such questions define an individual and her self awareness. So far this story is the best story to ask a question with many answers who am I?

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Guess I’ve got some corrections to go over tonight.

Tanky’all :wink:

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So
In an effort to tease my readers what do you think happens next?

1.Silic in a police standoff using a creative dance number to escape.

2.Morrigan and her team rob a bank cross First and Silic’s path and attempt to take hostages?

3.A KRV capture team appears?

Or do you have an altogether different imagining of the chaos to come?

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Well, I have no idea what WILL happen, but the KRV capture team? That sounds just like my idea of fun!

(though perhaps it’d be just a tad too soon in the story… rhmm, hard to say.)

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Silic dance off? Yes please.

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1 and 2 at the same time.

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  1. its silic they would engeneer a scene just to do it…
  2. that sounds like fun
    Optomist Naive First gets caught doesnt really try to escape
    Morgan:I got a Hostage nobody move
    First: claps Yaay im helping
    Silic Laughing no your not but this is to rich ill tag along just to see how this ends. btw Morgan bad choice in hostage…
    3.that likely will happen anyway i just hope its at a hilarious moment.

All awesome choices
ok # 2 then # 3 then # 1 all in the same instance

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Morrigan needs to appear ASAP!

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Would be nice to splatter the KRV team over the pavement

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Yeah I think 1 and maybe one of the the others at the same time. I mean if we’re with silic there’s bound to be all sorts of chaos.

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