Another small nudge forward.
This update closes out the first chapter and leads ahead a little. It’s unfinished so bear with me.
Now it’s a update.
Another small nudge forward.
This update closes out the first chapter and leads ahead a little. It’s unfinished so bear with me.
Now it’s a update.
Ooooo Bunnah you been working hard, do you require a massage for more motivation?! XD
I can relate. People always shop like there will be no food whenever there’s a holiday.
There’s sarcasm there but I can’t tell what kind lol
But a massage is a massage lmao
Lol the flirty kind…And updates are good, hence a reward! 
You gulp with a guilty shift. All those eyes on you making you blush for the first ti
You gulp with a guilty shift. All those eyes on you making you blush for the first time
Is what I think you meant XD.
You nod in agreement You think amusingly to yourself “I wanna be a
cowgirl!” Empathy clapped her hands over her mouth and glared at you.
Wow! You didn’t think that’d work. BWHAHA always makes me laugh thanks I needed that!
I keep picturing in my head First’s impression of what Empathy might look like in a stereotypical cowgirl outfit.
It just keeps getting funnier.
I need to find that scene! Holy crap I’m laughing really hard!
what happened to the sonic-pistols from the lab? Didn’t’t he know? That those di-
Didn’t
The sssshhhhhh and rattle was the last sounds you heard from the gun wielding gaurd…
guard
it was starting to really sink in that once out of this building you were really ‘out’ no walls no gaurds just you and the open sky.
guards
Damn I hate the ‘guard’ word!
Always sneaks by me
The double n’t’t is a word/notepad glitch… they don’t like eachother
@Snoe
It was very wierd looking. (in the swimming scene)
weird
Sure you were used to the eyes and the ever present eyes of everyone around you
repetition
It’s funny how every time write want to write guard you write gaurd instead, Whats your issue with guards Snoe! 
Your eyes light up at the mention of lunch, thats right a whole new world of food had opened up to you too!
First. He’s a super foodie as well as a superhero.
Cut to Empathy being jealous that waif!First can eat pretty much a semi full of food and not gain a single pound past 240.
Mine is 450. Amazons are hot, right Empathy?

Nah, Waif-First. I can’t really picture Ven as anything otherwise. 
Partially because glacier waifs are like, my favorite thing evar.
When you’ve not the slightest clue as to what in the world is going on… •-•
That’s cryptic…
Care to elaborate or was that a reaction to the ‘waif’ comment above you?

That’d be me all the time whenever I get on this site.
Also @Snoe, Does Empathy always have a window into First’s mind? Or is it like a light switch where she can look when she wants to and then stops seeing it when she doesn’t want to see it.