That’d I’d consider going a bit far.
At this point Vyde is Too much for First to take on, and he’d be the only one that Silic would steer clear of.
Vaihl wasn’t there, so she’s neither here nor there on the subject. Empathy was there ‘with’ Vyde to sort out the mess, a mediator/lie-detector/compass/moral support and conscience.
Ten, well, probably have plenty of opportunity to attempt to play ‘whack-a-Ten’ but its like trying to hit Batman if he had Spider-senses.
Here I’m not exactly sure, but I think it when we ask “What they know about us” where we see our thoughts on Vaihl’s manner of speaking and Vydes and Empathy’s reaction to ‘lecture’. But explanation itself starts on the next page so it looks a little premature?
OH!!!
Now I know what happened!
I wrote some of the *if statments in ‘Micro-word’ and pasted them over so the program isn’t reading the *if’s properly!
that’s likely why these glitches are showing up…
I’ll see what I can do to fix
EDIT: Makes me wonder how much has been lost in earlier sections… might be a whole lot or just recent stuff… I’m gonna run through and re-input the *if’s kinda like a soft reset and see if that works.
EDIT2: I re-updated hopefully the ‘ifs’ take root now.
Also not sure if it’s mistake, but does Vaihl’s offer of sparring/Ten’s sharing some info about Lydia connected to trust? Because before update first didn’t happen, but second did (with Vaihl’s trust at 1 and Ten’s at 2), now it’s the opposite regardress of trust level.[/spoiler]
A few errors from my ‘blitz’ writing the other night, I get alot done but some small things go missing, but yes and no. Vaihl likes to fight everyone, first hand experience helps her deduce powertypes and enhances the quality of her work. The better she knows how powers opperate in field conditions the better she can modify the tech to work with those powers.
So ‘yes and no’ in a sense that this particular moment does depend on trust, but she likes to fight anyway. Or ‘yes’ her comment connected to trust, but ‘no’ Ten’s isn’t. Sorry, I’m a bit slow sometimes.
Can I just say, I really do love this story and cant wait to see where it goes. It feels like I check every day incase of an update. And if I’m lucky enough there is one and I’m so happy. So thank you for brightening my day. You’re a fabulous writer.
choices to take our frustation i mean choices to say something like " You have no right to interfere with silic and me back then, it was my bussiness not yours…so f**k off"
i want my mc to blame empathy and vyde for messing with our life and oportunity to meet again with cormell, since silic was going to get us where cormell is.
maybe depending in our own skills? like if we have speed and agility we can beat him, hmm i hate him
I like ten. He’s joining mine and Empathy’s comedy gang when he can predict ten seconds ahead, speed and Agility won’t matter. If he sees the future through a first person instead of a third person perceptive, it’s possible to sneak attack him. If not, overwhelm will be your option.
@anon4518890
I thought about ten power and first is (kinda) well adapted to fight him with hight speed. Knowing in advance you gotta get punch doesn’t help if when first does trow the punch they are so quick that ten cannot move away. Ten power make him a badass but he’s still physically human