yay, yay!! Gz ,you and this game deserved it snoe 
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I do OWE all of you for the confidence to put something like this together.
So thank you all for the support you’ve shown and I’ll endeavor to keep up the quality I’ve shown so far… and improve my scatter-grammar.
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PS:
I have updated the WIP, the Q&A session is running longer than I thought it would. Guess I jus like filling in with background information. AND I’m playing around with the subroutine functions a bit trying to figure the ins and outs.
THAT and I’m enjoying the dialog within, really fleshes out the characters. Please do let me know if the last section is a bit too bland or needs more First choices, or if I missed anything.
Mind the spoilers though wouldn’t want to ruin anything.
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So, a short report of mostly spelling mistakes I found, having had a chance to sit down properly and enjoy this (it’s been ages).
These are from a Troublemaker play-through.
Just before ‘Luger’s workout’:
The overseers should’ve known something was goign to happen;
Going up on the roof:
Nobody saw[,] it didn’t happen, doors suck anyway[,] all they do is keep people out or in.
Add commas? 
Question time:
”Atlantus? Didn‘t that sink?” It wasn’t a name that inspired confidence though there was a ‘t’ missing, probably done on purpose.
It has a U instead of an I, rather than missing a T, I believe? Unless you misspelt it (either Alantus or Atlantis) here and it should be Alantus. Even then, though, it should have an I in there instead of the U as well. 
‘What do you know about me?’ question.
On that subject Vaihl started appropriately from there. She explained that the plane itself had come somewhere from within the Swedish Alps and made for Alantus.
Swiss Alps, I presume. Many seem to confuse these two, mostly people from USSR, those Yanks are so silly sometimes (just a joke, people!). 
Love the update otherwise. 
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[spoiler]So Ms. Barbas wants to know you’re deep dark secrets… maybe you could be creative? You smirk inwardly to yourself, and think up a lovely little tale, your hands going about the best way to tale your wild tale. The short story of it was that you were abducted as a child by a wandering tribe of space hamsters! And to join them it is required to sacrifice your voice to their god for the power to speak with animals… except goats the arch nemesis of the space hamsters.
Before long everyone in the room is giving you an odd look, except for Empathy who’s fighting the slightest smile by holding a hand over her lips. Ten doesn’t stop in his translation even embellishing you a little bit aswell. Heck he’s helping you make this even more unbelievable in his own less than enthusiastic style.[/spoiler]
First, Ten and Empathy. This trio are going to be the pinnacle of comedy in my playthroughs XD
I was little surprised that Ten did the translating and not Empathy.
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@Snoe
It’s then that you’re pleasantly surprised ”No Moron, I can beat you with this stick ii you want.” Was his reply in articulate but only mildly offended motions. Which seemed to soften towards the end.
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Made the fixes thanks for the extra eyes folks!
Though I don’t see how or why that one line was doubled up??? the code looks normal… maybe a glitch.
Could be, it happens.
Could be, it happens.
And you’re welcome - and thank you for keep creating this world for us. 
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I see what you did there! 
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So just catching up on the discussions that’s happened while I’ve been away.
To dislocate First’s arm is a feet likely made impossible for any mortal at this point. If you can fall from the top of mount Everest(or the usual cruising altitude of a 747 which First did) and be like, “Well that sucked best get going now though.” Then you’ve officially reached Goku/Superman level of strength. World domination would take like a week to do.
As for their inner voice, I’m thinking Ryan Reynolds for a male Frist and a female first would be Katy Townsend. (The voice of Cait from Fallout 4)
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So good 
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I just played through the game again and I still love it. Only I find odd is when you ask questions at the end it feels like pieces of conversation are missing.
It might just be missing… hard to say without knowing what you’re referring to.
Aside from that glad you still like it.
it felt like something was missing after first told them their story and they seem to call first something to describe someone with such powers but we never get that sentence. It seems to skip over that and continues with what was meant. Then when first asks about other things we get detailed descriptions of how the question is answered and everyone’s reaction or rather what they do while the answer is given but we don’t get any dialogue until after that and then it feels like something was missing or was skipped. I could maybe see about getting Screenshots if that would help or maybe quotes. It’s just hard to do with my bad internet. 
And I very much love your game. I love troublemaker/sarcastic first and empathy
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i think is getting more and more linear, this update dont have choices that show how we feel about them so far and what we want to do, so i think it might be nice if when we talk to vyde and vaihl we get some choices to say: fkk you for interfering with me and silic (after all silic is the one who knows where Cormell is…), thanks them… etc and that bastard Ten… i wanna beat him senseless 
A fiery response.
No worries the update costed of a four hour binge writing fest. I got alot done quickly but haven’t yet gone back to elaborate beyond fundamental corrections.
There are several unfinished points and possibly some errors where there are missing sections. Which is likely the case I’ve found a few that are missing.
We shall see.
As per linear it may feel that way but bear with me. The whole first chapter is
Kinda linear it’s a big tutorial and stage set up for the most part. No worries First will speak their peace.
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hmm i will like that you add some choices to take our frustation at vyde, vaihl , even empathy for interfering with our mc and silic, and the scene with Ten… well, it will be nice to fight and beat him, atleast a bit
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@Nathan_Faxon, Figured I’d give Empathy a little break, like I said her powers do make her tired and in a room filled with such potent personalities would really sap her… AND Vaihl already asked Ten to translate, not too mention Vaihl and Empathy don’t exactly get along, so I doubt Empathy wants Ms. Barbas in her brain. She’s there mainly to keep everyone honest.
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What would be awesome is if first had a danger room like session to further see his abilities for the rest of the characters