Freak: Amidst the Neon Lights WIP and playtest.... last update July 4th 2019

So I tried this demo out the other day, first time I ever played and I did so completely blind. Didn’t read the thread, haven’t heard anyone discussing it so I thought, “Eh why not? It’s been commented on pretty frequently so chances are good the author won’t cease work on it (so getting invested won’t be a problem) and I don’t have any other C.o.Gs to play for awhile.”

Initial impressions of the game: [spoiler] Your set up options for character customization really had me enthralled during the beginning. Being able to pick a personality that feels very well written out really made me curious to read more. I chose the sarcastic little MC at first. Very rebellious about his circumstances. The fact that this personality choice has far reaching consequences in scenes later on is one of the most important things for me when I play one of these games. Choices that don’t affect things are boring but so far every choice has had a vastly unique effect on the gameplay.

Also the ability to not speak is a very interesting one indeed. I don’t think I’ve seen any other game besides an old PS2 title (Drakengard) have it be canon that the MC is physically unable to speak. Really added to the uniqueness factor.

Now about midway through right as I was about to be put to sleep/death(?) I was confronted by the pervy doctor, when he hit the MCs prime caretaker I desperately wanted the option to actually put him in his place. You gave me that option and while yes it wasn’t a very smart option, it was by far the most satisfying one.

After everything happened though and the poor MC was thrust out into the big mean world. I had two goals well three if you count finding the doctor. Find out why I was created,then rain absolute hell on anyone that tries to get in my way.[/spoiler]

Now I have a few questions which you may or may not be able to answer.

1:Is the MC a test tube baby or does he have parents somewhere out in the world?

2:How long do you intend to make this game/do you intend to make multiple of them?

3: If the answer to question 1 is that the MC does have actual parents then are they One Punch Man and Ciri from the Witcher? Because that is the type of MC that I have.

All in all, great work. I’ll be keeping tabs on this thread from now on.

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Why thankya!hugs Glad you like my work!

  1. Not telling Massive plot point any way you slice it.

  2. I’m planning on six chapters total. Between prologue and chapter one there are 40,000words thus far that being the goal so the average chapter should be round about 20, 000- 40,000 words a chapter. The first two chapters will be left open to all to play. As per sequels I dunno yet THOUGH a title has been bouncing around my head “Freak: In the Dark Corners” images of a super powered prison colony lol BUT I’ve got tons of different stories and world’s I’d love to explore all of which hinge on how well this does after release. Wish me luck in that regard.

3.yeah… no… lol First’s secrets will be rather interesting. These ideas were the very FIRST things I decided. Lmao.

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Imagines one punchman combined with Ciri

No need to thank me, you made a world worth enjoying. Rather, I thank you for such an interesting read. It was extra fun having the right song playlist in the background for it.

Aww shucks and here I thought you’d reveal such a massive plot point if I asked politely enough. Curses!

Oh! So a bit over the usual length of recent c.o.gs/h.gs? well that’s certainly exciting! Just curious are you going to try and have the game finished this year or perhaps some time in 2017? No pressure of course :slight_smile: Merely wondering when you yourself expect to see it completed or at least close to complete.

Aww come on! It totally has to be them. And ouch the puns…they burn worse than the medieval superheroes fireblast did.

Only one person knows that one, and they guessed half of it. SO I essentially reward clever detectives lol, and there are hints scattered, miniscule for the time being but they’ll lead up to the truth eventually.

Haven’t a clue, to be honest. At times I can ‘blast out’ massive amounts of text in a short time (at the crippling cost of grammar and spelling as a few of the early watchers have seen.) BUT I’d like to get it done before the end of the year, but that depends on how life rolls along I spose.

Well First was partially inspired by protaganists from old PSONE characters. My favourite games where the main character doesn’t or barely speaks.

  1. the son of Genkaku (from Suikoden 2, you chose the name, inspired my love of choices)

  1. Serge(chrono cross)

http://www.cosplayhouse.com/images/D/Chrono_Cross_Serge_shoes_ver_01-2-06.jpg
3. Caim (Drakengard… good guess by the by)

They make up an effective vision of effective Silent protaganists, and Caim is a total powerhouse so… yeah:)

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So polite equates to nothing?! It seems I must switch gears then. Sherlock Holmes mode engage!

I definitely can understand you there. That rush of inspiration that has you writing faster than you can think up new words then once it’s run its course just a sea of nothing. Am I close to the mark there?

I never got to play any of those games besides Drakengard. I love that game. If you made his hair white I think that would be the sprite version of my MC.

You know I haven’t thought of it much but I wonder if First has siblings. I suppose it’s possible.

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What does KRV stand for.
I assume when they made first they were doing it for weaponizing us or something.
Are they researching how to make freaks?
Are they planning to weaponize us and freaks?

I also assume lydia is quintessential in making us as they seem to want to catch her alive.
So what hand did she have in making us?

Does lydia have special DNA they used to make first?

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Doesn’t her profile [spoiler]mention her being First’s surrogate mother? If there was shared DNA, even partially, to top it off she would be biological one, and she denied being their mother.

As for DNA ‘donor’ at the moment likeliest suspect seem to be Kreagan, due to characters themselves comparing first’s power level with them.
…On other hand might be red herring, and then I would suspect Emanuel Kravic. No evidence, just gut feeling.[/spoiler]

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that’s her relationship with us though and they never mention her genetic relations even if we don’t share any genes with us it’s most likely she was a big player in making us since the KRV want her alive

I noticed on the stat page it updates your personality etc. and the way it’s writen makes it sound like the KRV is still watching you, so WHAT IF the KRV planned the whole escape and the whole thing with First being out in the city is a test aka phase 2! … They know he can’t escape since it’s an island surrounded by water and we know First isn’t fond of that.

Or maybe im just paranoid? :hushed:

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DUN DUN DUN you would make for a great conspiracy theorist!

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Puts on tinfoil hat - Watch out conspirators here i come! :fearful:

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Well can’t argue her importance either way: she worked for a project at least for 18 years of First’s life and who knows how long before after all. And again judging by her profile she is a brilliant scientist, would be a waste to kill her. Besides she can be used to attempt manipulating First.

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Not so much concerned about conspiracies just yet first has to recuperate. I mean he died,fell out of a plane with no parachute and then had someone start digging through their mind. He needs a break, maybe a beer or two and lots and lots of aspirin.

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Your a better at making it not believable
I claim you to be with them by pointing out the truth in a insane way to throw us off the scent

Ten is kinda cool and has the lab tech fun times

I have no idea what your talking about? :neutral_face:

Snoe paid me

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Such a tangled web I weave lol

Well some of you hit on some points others wide misses. It’s kinda fun seeing you come so close then veer off.
One of you pretty much hit the mark but the details are off.

As per First being an attempt at weaponizing Freaks. Those are Swigs they’ve already invented those;)

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I am spot on, but I ain’t telling no one. Not even you, @Snoe . It’d reveal too much, yes ma’am, it would. :neutral_face:

:innocent:

Please do weave on, by all means. :grinning:

You can’t deceive me I know I’m 98% positive that there is a 60% chance of being 80% off on everything except my mc’s hair which is obviously short and neon hot pink.
Or I could be rambling on about nothing in fascination with this game.

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Oh and KRV stands for Kravic, Reinhold & Volsh. It’s a company under three shareholders Kravic runs the medical aspects of the company being a former doctor and brilliant bio geneticist aswell as a never seen recluse.

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