Freak: Amidst the Neon Lights WIP and playtest.... last update July 4th 2019

No world breakers I promise! Though a few with a few miles AOE.

Side note, no one’s invincible, that’s one thing I stand by whole heartedly Every single character hi low middle, human can be brought down one way or another. I always build in a realistic weakness or two be it personality flaw or chink in the armor. Hell Empathy can bring down some heavy hitters given direct contact. Like someone mentioned its not the power set but the user.

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#Few miles of AOE

#Few miles

#Few

#Miles

#of

#AOE

I see headaches in the future.

And pain lots of pain.

Better start putting points into grit.

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Why do I get the feeling we’ll find out First is one when someone ACTUALLY makes them snap?

Let’s hope they doesn’t snap, things would get… ugly :

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for some reason i just found this wip i love it its really good i really like the setting too

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It was fate. That is the reason you found this wip, it was meant to be. :slightly_smiling:

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Ah a few miles of AoE. “What do you mean lugging around multiple nuclear bombs is frowned upon? It’s only a few miles of AoE.” MC says to TSA agent.

Your only allowed 2 hydrogen bombs or 1 antimatter bomb
As of the latest tsa regulations

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“Fine. First I can only bring toothpaste containers in travel size and now they won’t let me bring all my nukes. I swear these policies are only getting worse. Soon they’ll be saying I can’t bring my C4 collection on board.”

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41,000 WORDS YAY! Confetti

Anyway, I was excited to have gotten another 10,000 words.

I’ve updated the file and it’s 'just a touch further and I’ve completed the ‘Barging in’ Option side of things

Long sotry short I’ve only a few more steps until this chapter is done and the next comes to my desk and we can get to some legitimate mischief!

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Oh man, oh man what a lovely surprise!

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:tada:

Congratulations and huzzah! :smiley:

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I have to say, though. 41 000 is an odd milestone, very odd indeed. Otherwise, good job, you’re almost there!

“Not the most pleasant individual.” :stuck_out_tongue:

Ten seems alright, for the most part. I mean, he humored Ven for a bit and spoke up when she was trying to explain she was mute. I’m reserving judgement until I see the scumbag moves.

I like nyoka showing off

Well you were polite. if you try to barge into the the meeting or push passed him. And No Ten isn’t a scum bag just grumpy

In the [spoiler ] case - what goes around, comes around, no? :wink:

Yeah, I had to make a mean character just to test. :sweat_smile:

Making eye contact with you the olded gentleman called your attention.

older

“If it aint Captain Saturday mornin, thought you had a TV special to film on the BDC mate?”

ain’t mornin’

#That was an accident, you didn’t want to hurt anyone.

don’t sounds better and seems more of a correct usage.

“I can see that Empathy, but thankyou.”

missed a space in thank you XD

Vyde you were filming in ‘his’ territory!" Silic burst out laughing… you didn’t get the jooke

joke

OH this is a NEWs cast…this thing is a television cool! Different than you imagined.

NEWS

simply strolled into the room pulled a cair out from the central table

chair

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Here is a repetition
Physical Profile: Through physical examinations and testing we have determined that that First’s strength and resilience has grown exponentially along with her size and muscle tone. Weighing in at 450lbs since last measurements it appears that cell density is triple that of a normal 18 year old female. The full extent of First’s abilities are as of yet unknown. cell density is triple that of a normal 18 year old female. The full extent of First’s abilities are as of yet unknown

Its very good. I’m interested to see where the story is going and the dialogues ares interesting! :slightly_smiling:

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In the end ‘‘like a heirarchy’’ should be ‘‘like a hierarchie’’

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