ow god am in love with this cant wait for more
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You make that sound like it’s an everyday thing for you, I’m not sure if I’m envious of your strength or feel bad for the injuries. Hope you get better soon though
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Guess im positive because despite the fact that I am and have always been accident prone (this one tops the list.) And my record is still unbroken as I have never to my knowledge had a broken bone.(documented at least might broke a toe but can’t prove it)
Or I’m horribly optimistic and these painkillers are really effective.
Thanks though. All of you.
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Perhaps it is wrong of me, but that gave me a chuckle. 
Glad you’re staying positive, it is far better than negative. Whether or not it is the painkillers is irrelevant, I would venture.
That said, please do try to not have too many accidents (as if it was under your control - but you know what I mean, hopefully). 
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Some of the painkillers you can get from hospitals put you in a permanently happy state and stick a big stupid grin on your face 
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There also lobotomies and botox… but I smile too much as it is. My face hurts at the end of the day; )
Hurting from the good stuff is the good stuff.
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I am SO tempted to make a dirty comment!
And both are true
Ps:mini nudge forward. Still working just a Lil slower. Working on introducing Ten.
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What’s stopping you? 
Both? Stuff and good?
PS- Ten? What about Two to Nine? 
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Polite conversation and the bf would kill me if I overshared lol
Ten is a Freak with the ability to see ten seconds into the future, and the reaction time and memory to employ it. 
Also Vaihl’s muscle… when she’s too busy to deal with something herself.
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Good reasons indeed.
Ah, I see, although I did not quite ask that. Was actually mostly wondering what happened to Two, Three, Four, Five, Six, Seven, Eight and Nine. Not that I really want to know - not yet, at least. Might learn in-game and that’s fine by me. 
Do so look forward to see where First’s adventures will head off to next. 
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Lol Ten is the name for his abilities lol if there otherwise he’d be Tenth
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Well, there might be a One too. With the ability to be One person, at One time, in One place. All at Once. 
Holy Crap…
…and I’m here sobbing about my paper cut…
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I can’t leave for two days without someone getting hit by a car. XD 
Get well soon Snoe
-your most emotional friend
-Ryse
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So what shouldn’t you do, think of the people…I kid I’m just trying to get a ryse out of you
I wish you well snoe had those happy time stuff for when I was getting rid of the big C. major happy time drug is helpful
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The puns are strong in this one. lol
And here I was thinking, “What’s it going to take for that guy to slow down?”
Get well soon, Snoe.
You got hit by a car. Stop it. Rest and recover.
[quote=“Snoe, post:1147, topic:13740”]Ten is a Freak with the ability to see ten seconds into the future, and the reaction time and memory to employ it. Also Vaihl’s muscle… when she’s too busy to deal with something herself.
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Will you cut it out? Stop it. I never thought I’d say this on this forum, but stop writing. Don’t write any more.
Your story is imaginative enough without you loading up on drugs and churning out the Choicescript version of Slaughterhouse 5.
You had a mass murderer made out of sparkly dust or whatever, and a character who knowlingly allowed other people to refer to her as “Loli,” and that was when you were sober. I don’t want to read the bit where First realizes that all matter is energy condensed to a slow vibration and we are all one consciousness experiencing itself subjectively, so First steps forward in time (which is but an illusion) to the beginning of the polyverse and makes psychic love to the Narf Queen. Please don’t make me make psychic love to the Narf Queen.
When Stephen King got hit by a van and was on pain killers, do you know what he did? He wrote a novel about an alien fungus that gets into your bloodstream and settles in your gut. Then it grows into a creature called (I am not making this up) a “shit weasel,” which chews its way out of your body through your anus as you bleed to death. He wanted to call the novel Cancer, but his wife wouldn’t let him.
Rest up. Get better. I don’t want to make psychic love to the Narf Queen.
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found some typos and grammar stuff that needs fixin’
You were ready for the day’s exercise long before arrived at the other side of the lab
should probably say “before you arrived”
Your eyes Drifting to stare into the distance knowing he passively watching you
“he is passively”
The air around the dead man glittered with a red cloud of what appeared be sand or specks of glass.
“appeared to be”
It was an awkward moment considering the dead man on the floor the a person sitting in a cold storage unit(you) and this Silic person…thing.
remove “the” and add some coma’s
Silic saw fit to explain himself before you fatigued mind came up with some other damning story
you should be your
you still could help but level a questioning glare as the glass creature shot back a feral grin.
could should be “couldn’t”
There had to be more to this whole thing, but Silic wasn’t going t be easy to hold a conversation with.
should be “to”
now you my little freaksicle have got to get off this plane before we make unfortunate landing.
should say “make an unfortunate landing.”
interrupted bit little jab from his opponent interrupting Moleculo from getting a full charge.
not sure what this was suppose to say at all?
You see silhouettes here and there including the dark hand reached out to you
reached should be reaching
Lying under pile of rubble from whatever was left of the plane…
should be “under a pile of rubble”
fear growing a knot in your gut… were going to suffocate down there?
should be “were you going”
Evening Em, pardon me ofr intruding but I’m assuming Loli has left the building?
ofr should be for
So you ind yourself following her back down the hooked path of the stairs
your missing a letter here, I’ll just stop now ^.^
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I didn’t realize how badly I wanted to make psychic love to the Narf Queen until now…
Keep writing, Snoe 
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