caught a few typos
i think you meant simply?
i think it should be friend
the fresh smell
i think it should be plates to eat on them
perhaps it should be just bath to get into, without you?
this one just seems strange
grammar is hard for me, but i think it should be there are new scars since “scars” is plural but i can be wrong???
packless, perhaps? but once again, i can be wrong
shouldn’t it be shatter?
seems like you accidentally typed as you twice
you breathe out, no?
to be a part of it
set everyone on fire, this “one” part seems extra
once again, grammar is hard, but i believe it should be this was the first time
cuts leave scars
when you trot back