found a few pronoun mix-ups 'n a little something extra
“I’ll try to make nice with the suspicious stranger. It’ll be grand! I’ll paint him nails, he’ll braid my hair!”
“Ugh, I’ll go over to him room and ask if she wants to get drinks with me…okay?”
She repeats this over and over until her remembers how much of a stupid idea this was in the first place and stops.