Forsaken (WIP) |Chapter 5, Bard's path has been restored

Choo choo!! All aboard dirt bags, next stop Vengeance Village!!!

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I make a deal 0F body parts you keep the legs I keep the arms

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The story is soooo cool! Can’t wait to see more!

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Seconded.

Also, I’m really feeling those knees of the MC :sweat_smile:

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Lol I died when I found out I can Rick roll gods. I’m glad I found this wip

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If it were illusion, there would be no reason for vengeance

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If AMR has taught us anything, it’s that MCs die to come back stronger.

Guess Forsaken is coming back as the Fundamental, a minor god.

So to Mael, I would say: “Thanks, homie Batman, that bullet trick really brought me home. Except I’m an ass that just won’t stay dead, so—“ bleeds out and immediately comes back to life “WASSUP?”

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To be honest I was expecting someone to try to kill us some point but I didn’t expect it this soon. We did kind of deserve it for our mistake in the past that ruined everyone lives and ourself. Is this going to be fake death or we gonna be reborn stronger from it?

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yes

The bullet piercing through MC’s heart is solid evidence, yes :rofl:

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To me I don’t take it personally but I like to understand why he did it so his punishment will be less painful I aint going to kick him in the balls if he tells me the reason just as a revenge even pay

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Don’t you, guys, find it strange that he said “nothing personal”? I mean, he actually had very personal reasons to want to kill MC.

And become a slave to stronger psycho…

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Then damn you and Mael :joy_cat::joy_cat::joy_cat: I’ve always been more of the murder threatening foxy Velvet’ team anyway.

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Welcome back, thanks for update

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By the way, is it intentional or a bug that, when the fox lady brings us coffee, every option other than ignoring it decreases the relationship?

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So glad to see this one is still alive, also addressing the elephant in the room

Nothing personal? I think that magic bullet you put in my chest was pretty f***ing personal dude! I mean it definitely entered the personal space that is my internal organs!

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Mael: I mean. . . Whoops?

Forsaken: And they call me the team asshole.

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Most surprising thing about that is Velvet’s reaction to it as a RO. Like damn girl, you really love us that much???

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Well we can always tolerate betrayer in story becauss we are detached like seeing someone else being betrayed. Irl I doubt i can ever forgive someone who trying to kill me no matter what the reason is. Someone wise said that people die if they are killed. If you dead you wont have the time to forgive anyone

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Definitely keeping this on my radar

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I laughed so hard at this scene that everyone in the house came to see what was going on xD

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