# Flaming Love (SUPER-DUPER ADULTS ONLY CONTENT!) **URL:** \ **Category:** Works In Progress\ **Created:** [January 26, 2015, 8:57pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/flaming-love-super-duper-adults-only-content/7095 "2015-01-26T20:57:08Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 14\ **Page:** 3
**Author:** ![PervMasterL](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/pervmasterl/32/219865_2.png) [@PervMasterL](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/PervMasterL)\ **Post date:** [January 28, 2015, 12:30am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/flaming-love-super-duper-adults-only-content/7095/41 "2015-01-28T00:30:44Z")
Update out. Woot! Sorry it took so long, but when I had to write the parts that weren’t sex, it was sort of like… Can we just get to the sex already? Also, I wrote the sex part really fast, because you know I was so excited and it was just like ohmygosh I can’t believe how turned on I am and ohgod I think I need to pause and masturbate or something and- Wait, why the hell am I telling you this? Well the point is, there might be a few grammatical or spelling errors. Oh yeah, and as you might have guessed, this part contains sex! A wet dream, sure, but sex! _ **SEX!** _ But, just so you know, this is what the protagonist _imagines_ the boys to be like. So there might be some differences when she actually hooks up with them. And that is something I plan on capitalizing on fully. Oh, and watch out for snakes. ---
**Author:** ![PervMasterL](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/pervmasterl/32/219865_2.png) [@PervMasterL](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/PervMasterL)\ **Post date:** [January 28, 2015, 12:32am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/flaming-love-super-duper-adults-only-content/7095/42 "2015-01-28T00:32:25Z")
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**Author:** ![PervMasterL](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/pervmasterl/32/219865_2.png) [@PervMasterL](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/PervMasterL)\ **Post date:** [January 28, 2015, 1:08am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/flaming-love-super-duper-adults-only-content/7095/43 "2015-01-28T01:08:11Z")
I’d like to apologize to @Razgriz, because apparently I said something that was offended a bunch of people. I apologize from the bottom of the black pit where my heart is supposed to be,. [![](https://sd.keepcalms.com/i/please-forgive-me-and-keep-loving-me.png) ](https://sd.keepcalms.com/i/please-forgive-me-and-keep-loving-me.png) Also, this post was flagged and I had to edit it but I have no idea why? ---
**Author:** ![Razgriz](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/razgriz/32/21855_2.png) [@Razgriz](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Razgriz)\ **Post date:** [January 28, 2015, 1:18am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/flaming-love-super-duper-adults-only-content/7095/44 "2015-01-28T01:18:04Z")
Oh that’s fine. I took it as a joke anyway. No harm done. 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![Koda222](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/koda222/32/107422_2.png) [@Koda222](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Koda222)\ **Post date:** [January 28, 2015, 1:27am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/flaming-love-super-duper-adults-only-content/7095/45 "2015-01-28T01:27:08Z")
Well its an interesting idea for a game. ---
**Author:** ![LordOfLA](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/lordofla/32/2777_2.png) [@LordOfLA](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/LordOfLA)\ **Post date:** [January 28, 2015, 3:22am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/flaming-love-super-duper-adults-only-content/7095/46 "2015-01-28T03:22:42Z")
Writing style: awesome. More: needed. “sharp tongued” seems to be a tame way of describing your writing style. Its fantastic! ---
**Author:** ![Raulin](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/raulin/32/1433_2.png) [@Raulin](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Raulin)\ **Post date:** [January 28, 2015, 4:07am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/flaming-love-super-duper-adults-only-content/7095/47 "2015-01-28T04:07:30Z")
“HHe starts to move his tongue around vigorously” - Too many “H” ---
**Author:** ![WUBWUBWUB](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/wubwubwub/32/87792_2.png) [@WUBWUBWUB](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/WUBWUBWUB)\ **Post date:** [January 28, 2015, 4:25am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/flaming-love-super-duper-adults-only-content/7095/48 "2015-01-28T04:25:54Z")
Hey, I’m not your target demographic, but I support you in your efforts. Keep doing what you do. Oh, and I like your prose. You English good. ---
**Author:** ![Sashira](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/sashira/32/2899_2.png) [@Sashira](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Sashira)\ **Post date:** [January 28, 2015, 6:26am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/flaming-love-super-duper-adults-only-content/7095/49 "2015-01-28T06:26:45Z")
I laughed. I cringed. We go between f-ed up situations I can do nothing about and would never want to be in, with lines that are pretty awesome - “Only a\*\*holes are named Chad.” “You even aspired to be an erotica writer at some point. But, after realizing that writing of any kind pays worse than a \*\*\*\*ING MINIMUM WAGE JOB, you decided to just become a cashier. Besides, everyone knows erotica writers are lonely virgins.” (I love fourth wall self-mockery, love it.) I do like to read erotica, and like the idea of an interactive version, but the scene I tried wasn’t fun or sexy to me. I chose the love interest that seemed the most like my type (Blake?) then got a dream where he’s a jerk and not even charming about it in a sadist/bad-boy way. (He also basically rapes you, which didn’t bother me because it’s not the “actual” character.) There can be a funny side to the sex scenes, but if they’re written as “well, that was awkward and not fun” (the tone I got from the narrator) it’s not the most enjoyable. Another note: COG players often hate to be told what they think. So in something like what you thought about a specific dream/sex scene, more options would help. I think of the “main character” as being a narrator, not myself. I am not sure how you would improve that for players like me. ---
**Author:** ![PervMasterL](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/pervmasterl/32/219865_2.png) [@PervMasterL](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/PervMasterL)\ **Post date:** [January 28, 2015, 4:05pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/flaming-love-super-duper-adults-only-content/7095/50 "2015-01-28T16:05:39Z")
@Sashira, I was originally going to make these first sex scenes interactive, but then I realized that with four sex scenes and at least three variants for each, that would be a total of 12 sex scenes. Now, I like writing sex scenes, but at that point I was kind of foaming at the mouth and thinking, “ASDWFDSFSAFD THIS IS GONNA TAKE FOREVER.” Also, these sex scenes were supposed to be funny in their own way. I was laughing while writing them, at least. I suppose what I was trying to aim for was a feeling that these scenes were just taking themselves too seriously. If you played all the scenes you might have gotten what I mean. With such lines as, “Of course, my princess,” and “You, me, sex, now!” I thought I had gotten that feeling down pretty good. ---
**Author:** ![FSketchy](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/fsketchy/32/19280_2.png) [@FSketchy](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/FSketchy)\ **Post date:** [January 29, 2015, 3:13am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/flaming-love-super-duper-adults-only-content/7095/51 "2015-01-29T03:13:26Z")
Lol I loved the demo. It was fun. Also I’m assuming your a Black Butler fan because of the Alois and Lucas pairing. Personally I’d choose Ciel tho…but Alois is definitly a good 2nd pick. ---
**Author:** ![PervMasterL](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/pervmasterl/32/219865_2.png) [@PervMasterL](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/PervMasterL)\ **Post date:** [January 29, 2015, 3:35am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/flaming-love-super-duper-adults-only-content/7095/52 "2015-01-29T03:35:27Z")
Oh my god, I actually am a fan but I wasn’t thinking of it at all at the time. Weird. ---
**Author:** ![Mirabella](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/ccd318/32.png) [@Mirabella](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Mirabella)\ **Post date:** [January 29, 2015, 3:58am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/flaming-love-super-duper-adults-only-content/7095/53 "2015-01-29T03:58:08Z")
Haha! “As you wish.” That, and the whole “princess” thing, reminded me of _The Princess Bride_. I’ll never be able to watch that movie again without giggling at that line, thanks to you. ---
**Author:** ![RETowers](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/retowers/32/21477_2.png) [@RETowers](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/RETowers)\ **Post date:** [April 14, 2015, 5:56am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/flaming-love-super-duper-adults-only-content/7095/55 "2015-04-14T05:56:34Z")
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