First Bull Run - Completed demo - 89,000 words

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I do

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I looked through it for sure. The stat screen did feel a bit awkward though. A little paring down wouldn’t necessarily be a bad thing.

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Loud and clear! It stays. But, I may try to condense it.

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UPDATES
replaced “continues” with page breaks
added paragraph where the troops are distracted by blackberries at the ford.
stats screen adjustments
improved casualty counting and reporting
minor fixes and improvements

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