Not to say your wrong but the normal human looking ones are biblically accurate as well. Both types exist in the bible (which is interesting as one description of the more horrific angels has cloven hooves.) So technically your correct andbi just thought this was interesting information
But as for me one of my MCs is an average vampire just with leathery wings. While my madness one is petite, has multiple eyes across her body, and her true form is a wisp but horrifying in appearence.
And my necromancer is a demon, horns, spade tail, and all.
I am curious when we will show are form and the reaction of the characters to it.
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Building a happy family in the woods kind of defies the point of a God power fantasy story. Also a bit more concise flow wouldnt hurt. It takes the momentum out of the story when the MC thinks to himself “oh theyre going to get it” three times before he does anything.
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Thanks for the feedback. Most certainly, the pacing for certain parts need to be more fleshed out and quickly done. Especially the parts with Amaryllis. This is still a WiP that will change and be edited as the story processes.
Fell Star isn’t a god, power-fantasy story, rather, it focuses more on the Found Family theme than being an Eldritch Entity, so if you were looking to being a powerful ‘god’ in the story, I’m sorry ^^’
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Hey there everyone, Pk here.
I’m still writing Fell Star and getting progress done, worry not. I did get sick with the summer flu and was busy in June, but I’ve gotten better and have been working hard. This isn’t an update, sorry bout that, but rather, just a quick question I’d like to ask. Something I’d personally like to know; How would you like the next update to be?
Each route are lengthy and different from one another; different people to meet, different fractions to befriend or make enemies with, and different stories, information, and mysteries to discover and learn-I’m just wondering what your thoughts would be for the next update.
Would you like a single upload with everything written and done, or would you prefer for the specific routes to be posted when they’ve been completed? Just a question I’ve been pondering about as I write.
- Post the Routes one by one.
- Post all the Routes in a single update.
I give you my thanks in advance for indulging in the poll and providing me your thoughts.
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I’d say do whatever is easiest for you. But then again getting the community input if you are indecisive (like me). Is always appreciated and great.
PS. Glad you got better. The seasons change Flu attack can be a pain, lol.
Anyways glad and hope all is good with you. Stay healthy and take your time.
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Kanri
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Okay first things first. Amazing this is so fricking amazing. I am literally so excited for this.
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But this gives u a chance to be a hero as well in case being a epic evil villain isn’t something u want. We are not good or bad yet the choice will come soon
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I one those types that belive Necessary evil in this one
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Brujah
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Oh, i dont know why but I’m such in love with concept! Where should be more games where you can play some that antogonistic MC. And you style of writing is beautiful! Now I’m wandering how I’m gonna sleep through the excitement i got from this piece😄
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Have a Question if you ever answer it if I How old is eye character or talk about a 100 years old a 1000 years old or 10 billion years old for 10 billion years If we’re on the million mark I’m going to say this we’re very fucking old
MC’s true age is a bit of a spoiler, if we’re not counting certain… Circumstances, but let’s just say MC is old.
The only individual truly close to MC’s age would be Meidh since they are, well, ‘childhood friends’.
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