# Feedback Offer/Request/Exchange Thread: July 2025 **URL:** \ **Category:** Writing and Content\ **Created:** [June 30, 2025, 3:09pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/feedback-offer-request-exchange-thread-july-2025/170956 "2025-06-30T15:09:38Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 6\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![HarrisPS](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/harrisps/32/240120_2.png) [@HarrisPS](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/HarrisPS)\ **Post date:** [June 30, 2025, 3:09pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/feedback-offer-request-exchange-thread-july-2025/170956/1 "2025-06-30T15:09:38Z")
Here’s a thread for offering or requesting feedback on WIPs. Please use the following templates when making your post. They’re based on some that Eiwynn made for a previous thread; let me know if there’s anything that would be useful to add or tweak. * * * **REQUESTING FEEDBACK** - Username: - Name of Project/Game: - Genre: - Timeframe in which you need (or would prefer) feedback: - Type of feedback that you are seeking (eg characters, pacing, worldbuilding, stats, choices, spelling/grammar): - Any content notes/warnings that readers should be aware of before starting (eg explicit content, gore, etc): - Link to the WiP thread, or other means of direct contact. Be sure to indicate if DMing is allowed: * * * **OFFERING FEEDBACK** - Username: - Genres/tags that interest you as a reader: - Hard passes. Things that mean you will not play a game (eg: gender-lock, extreme horror) - Time commitment: - Specific qualifications that would help authors (eg: you use a screen reader): - Any contact info the author can use to connect to you (be sure to indicate whether DMing is allowed or not): * * * ---
**Author:** ![Max\_Ferran](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/max_ferran/32/254163_2.png) [@Max\_Ferran](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Max_Ferran)\ **Post date:** [June 30, 2025, 2:34pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/feedback-offer-request-exchange-thread-july-2025/170956/2 "2025-06-30T14:34:08Z")
**REQUESTING FEEDBACK** - **Username:** Max\_Ferran - **Name of Project/Game:** _Blue Dominion: Book One_ - **Genre:** Dystopian / Sci-fi / Thriller - **Timeframe in which you need (or would prefer) feedback:** Anytime [next few months] - **Type of feedback that you are seeking:** Balancing attribute/stat bonuses and refining the combat system (both melee and ranged) for public demo [80k words] - **Any content notes/warnings:** Mild violence - **Link to the WiP thread:** [CoGDemos](https://cogdemos.ink/play/max-ferran/blue-dominion/mygame) - **Link to Patreon:** [Max Ferran | Bend the rules. Break the countdown. | Patreon](https://www.patreon.com/c/MaxFerran) - **DMs Allowed:** Yes Please reach out, suggestions are greatly appreciated! ---
**Author:** ![raywilson](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/raywilson/32/255721_2.png) [@raywilson](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/raywilson)\ **Post date:** [June 30, 2025, 5:28pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/feedback-offer-request-exchange-thread-july-2025/170956/3 "2025-06-30T17:28:11Z")
**OFFERING FEEDBACK** - Username: raywilson - Genres/tags that interest you as a reader: sci-fi, high & low fantasy, urban fantasy, romance, thriller, comedy - Hard passes: extreme angst, PC with severe mental illness - Time commitment: minimal, one or two reads a week with notes given - Specific qualifications that would help authors (eg: you use a screen reader): I am best equipped for proofreading (grammar errors, spelling errors, coding errors, etc.) OR developmental edits (more high-level notes on character and plot development, pacing, thematic impact/weakness, etc.). I have worked in editorial for a publishing house and freelancing previously, so very comfortable with giving thorough, actionable feedback - DMs welcome! ---
**Author:** ![raywilson](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/raywilson/32/255721_2.png) [@raywilson](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/raywilson)\ **Post date:** [June 30, 2025, 6:41pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/feedback-offer-request-exchange-thread-july-2025/170956/4 "2025-06-30T18:41:30Z")
hi!! messaged you ---
**Author:** ![ChanceOfFire](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/chanceoffire/32/270002_2.png) [@ChanceOfFire](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/ChanceOfFire)\ **Post date:** [July 1, 2025, 12:29am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/feedback-offer-request-exchange-thread-july-2025/170956/5 "2025-07-01T00:29:32Z")
**OFFERING FEEDBACK** - Username: @ChanceOfFire - Genres/tags that interest you as a reader: No preference. - Hard passes: None - Time commitment: I’m preparing for some itch jams soon, so I may not be able to respond immediately. - Specific qualifications that would help authors: I usually play on mobile. - Any contact info the author can use to connect to you: DM me. Indicate if you want feedback via DM, thread comments or itch comments. **REQUESTING FEEDBACK** - Username: @ChanceOfFire - Name of Project/Game: Scarlet Sorceress - Genre: Romance, Fantasy - Timeframe in which you need (or would prefer) feedback: Whenever is convenient - Type of feedback that you are seeking: Any feedback is fine. If you’d just like to provide general comments or opinions, that’s fine too. I would welcome that. - Any content notes/warnings that readers should be aware of before starting: Gender Locked Female, some mild sexual content. - Link to the WiP thread, or other means of direct contact: [Thread is here](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/scarlet-sorceress-full-beta-open-372k-words-romance-high-fantasy/166797). I prefer discussing on the WIP thread. ---
**Author:** ![DeadEnd](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/deadend/32/255097_2.png) [@DeadEnd](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/DeadEnd)\ **Post date:** [July 1, 2025, 2:21pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/feedback-offer-request-exchange-thread-july-2025/170956/6 "2025-07-01T14:21:30Z")
- Username: @DeadEnd - Name of Project/Game: The Cruel Palace - Genre: Low fantasy, Court intrigue, Romance - Timeframe in which you need (or would prefer) feedback: Whenever - Type of feedback that you are seeking (e.g. characters, pacing, world building, stats, choices, spelling/grammar): Characters, pacing (emphasis on this), choices, writing in general. - Any content notes/warnings that readers should be aware of before starting (eg explicit content, gore, etc): None rn - Link to the WiP thread, or other means of direct contact. Be sure to indicate if DMing is allowed: Dming is allowed. [Link to thread](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/updated-the-cruel-palace-korean-inspired-court-intrigue-game-prologue-chap-1-35k-words/170689)